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What about his journey to become an eternal??? Nooooooo. I can't accept this ending. Sequel????..............................................
Decent book, very repetitive. Good enough to be worth a read if you've got nothing else on. Can tell the author had enough by the end and just speedlined MC to becoming all powerful and finishing the book with a pretty mediocre ending
This was a surprisingly good read. (read ~380 chapters rn)I thought this was gonna be a generic "hide my OP power for no reason" kinda read but it gets really interesting as the story goes on.The whole "tame beasts" concept of the novel is over around chapter 50 and he leaves to a MUCH larger world. I'm not really a fan of modern settings but it's not there in the later parts of the novel since the "human race" that the MC spends the first part of the story is like an insignificant spec compared to the larger world.The MC is a battle maniac but the reason why is explained later along with the reason his system is the way it is. Everything is slowly being explained and the MC goes from over the top kinda hot-headed to more mellow and go with the flow as his power slowly reaches the peak of the world.Read about 100 chaps before deciding if this is for you or not
First of all, I like the title! It kinda reminds me of the book "I am number four". It also has a unique story line that the author described in the beginning of the chapter. That goes to show how dedicated he is (the author) to let, readers, know the world! Great job(plus *coughs* the scratching of his balls WKKWKW) Overall I like how you explained the story and what they see. The only thing that I want to point out are the confusing words and sentences in the story. It didnt distrupted my journey, but it would be really nice if you could improve those few lines better!
Definitely a different kind of story. This MC is actually old and has an adopted blind daughter. Unfortunately, I don't see much potential in the series. MC used up his system savings of around 30 years, just to obtain the technique to break into Foundation. With such an advanced age and troublesome daughter, the novel reads more like a slow slice of life story of a guy slowly getting stronger while taking care of a daughter that will definitely either get bullied a lot, or turn out to be a hidden super expert. It's not bad per se, but also not very engaging.
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It's a beautiful story and one of the best original fanfiction I've had in years. the only thing to say will be to have put the images of each girl, woman or character added because there are many characters from other manga or anime and for a person who has not seen or read all it is different manga that poses a problem of imagining what certain characters look like. Really hats off, it's a very good plot, I'm impatiently awaiting the continuation
I really like the character development and all the character s he gathers into his faction. I wish you would update morr often though.** I like your avatar of Bam
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very nice story and well arranged one too
are you updateing today