This is somewhat unreadable with the westernized names.. they don't fit in this xuanhuan beast story at all..........................................
This novel is literally a copy and paste of another system store Manger theme novel. The only difference is the name of the characters and items. Don't recommend reading this trash.
an amazing story with an interesting premise. I'm kinda sad the author hasn't updated it in over a year, but hopefully they'll come back and give us even more lol
the story seems to be interesting but lot grammar mistakes. i understand English is not native language but when you publish a work you should put out good quality. would recommend for everyone to give a read and ecide for themselves
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The author is wrong about the tag #overpowered, it is # weak to strong.
The plot seems good in the beginning but many loopholes begin to appear, and mc seems smart but dumb at the same time, and too less interaction the system, like he isn't curious about the system at all.
This is one of the best isekai on webnovel! Gives me Jensen Ackles from supernatural vibes! The unique mix of demon and isekai and backstory makes this hard to beat!
Alekzi asked me to leave a review as a fellow author and as the editor of this novel, and I will be as truthful as possible.I wanted to read this, as I am a friend to Alekzi, but I couldn't bring myself to do it at first because as an English native, it was difficult for me to deal with the sentence structure. After some chit-chatting, we came to an agreement that I would help him bring the writing up to snuff.It will take a while, but I'll be doing it as fast as I can for his future readers! Daily released chapters will be edited before posting, and I will tackle the former chapters as I can (:As for the story itself, I regret not reading this sooner! Even if there are issues with the grammar, Alekzi has had experience from writing many books before this, and he has truly mastered the art of captivation!The plot of the novel up to current is well thought out, the outline of current and future novel events is meticulously drawn out, and 'almost' every chapter has just enough entertainment to keep you hooked!Isaac is an intelligent (Not a super genius) character who almost completely lacks prior experience in MMO or VRMMO settings. He doesn't just automatically start as the best in the world as is seen in so many other VRMMO novels, and is actually somewhat outclassed in the earlier chapters. As White Online isn't set up like any VRMMO that was released previously in this world, his intelligence and lack of video game experience actually assist him in climbing his way up the ranks from the bottom of the barrell! I have enjoyed my read, and I hope that my work in raising the quality of this novel helps many others enjoy their read as well!
liked it, want more, no other opinion accepted. really appreciated. jaa ne~ ????????????????????????????????????
Came here from demonic dragon, Im gonna be honest I really do like this book, it has good pacing and overall has enough information to make it interesting. My only issue is the update schedule I really want to read more but 4 chapters every week isn’t enough for me, I do recommend this book tho
So far the story seems fun to read. I’m curious to read about the male lead
Very good book story and character development is awesome. Each character is given a proper story and whole world is included which makes it more interesting