Feels too much like a drama for my tastes. On a positive note, this is one of the better 'simulation' type novels out there, though it still isn't great, due to the lingering system elements.
So good it makes me wanna sad , excited, happy and angry for the characters plz keep it up
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This is a decent novel having "magic" in a modern society. Unfortunately like most such novels it suffers from some glaring plot holes. In the end I found the "trial 1" chapters to be very boring more than anything else, and coupled with the plot holes caused me to drop it at around chapter 140 even though I had been only skimming through those trial chapters.
First off about the other reviews on MC and his personality. In my opinion it is quite good like a normal human, and you will have problems with that only if you prefer the psychotic MCs of modern chinese xianxia.
Coming to the plot holes, the most glaring ones are those trials. Putting completely untrained teenagers, including just video gamers, in life and death scenarios in trial-0 (they would not really die though most participants don't know that) in a jungle against beasts and all is totally stupid. You will not filter out strong willed people like that, rather psychotic killers who have been killing since childhood.
Also you see some upper world fellows abusing some "loophole" (though we are never told what that is) to enter the trials, yet the organizers do zilch about it nor invoke any deterrence. In other words, if not for the appearance of MC, the trials are just places for upper world fellows to cheat and sweep away, losing the whole point of the trials. The appearance of MC is also a cheat but let's ignore that.
Then the second trial is even more stupid. Most participants have been training in the academy which is just regular studies, training and competitive fights but there is absolutely zero preparation for what they have in trial-1. So essentially these are again untrained teenagers put in this trial of "courage" or whatever. In real life the only result of such a trial will be creating fellows with deep traumas and unstable personalities, the kinds of which most modern armies will immediately expel.
Lastly my pet peeve on such modern setups though most readers seem to prefer it. Swords, spears, bows in a super advanced Earth. Give me a break. By any standard of logic magic infused guns, snipers, explosives and all will be far far superior. Just shows lack of imagination in conceptualizing modern weapons with magic/cultivation stuff, let alone futuristic weapons. Authors seem to be just following the classic cultivation novels rather than thinking about what such a post modern setup can actually look like.
Me giving myself some self advert. Don't mind me. I wonder when someone will come along to read this.......
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Anyways. Don't cry too much after reading this story, okay?
this is good plsssssss release more chapter I really like your novel
A brilliant start to a fantasy story and I look forward to reading more as it gets developed .
great writing, impressive efficiency, just not for me. It’s an amalgamation of existing tropes.
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
There are a phew spelling mistakes but other than that I really enjoyed it. Although it can be a bit confusing as some points.
And I'm waiting for the next chapter as it's so good and I want to find out what happens next!
The strength of this story is its good characterization. When the potato chip girl appeared, I didn't expect it to be so well written. I thought she would just be an insignificant supporting role.
The writer is very good at making good characterizations with minimal background characters.
i hope it gets picked.....................................................................................................................................
Story is pretty good and fresh Unique start with Mc an Fmc with incest I like it’s nice but I feel like the story progresses a bit too slowly besides the h-scenes n training a lil slow plot I don’t mind that but this guy acts like a rat so much for being a dragon dude won’t take no risks an I bet if his cultivation was high he still wouldn’t expose himself scared to die when they on a world with low cultivation which makes me not like parts of this novel makes him stand out as a *****