The story is well developed and plenty of world building. The only downside is all of the information dump, which can cause one to quickly lose enthusiasm for the novel.
what can i say this story is very heartwarming story i didnt even notice time pass and cant count how many times i smiled reading this, i just hope author would do little by little time skip also make mc actually do little exercise to be fit when he goes highschool in the future over all i love the story. keep it up!
Another sect building system.
The MC is someone who crossed over into a dead end sect with only one member besides himself, a mysterious girl (oh wow didn't see that coming)
Please excuse my sarcasm.
If you're a veteran wuxia reader like me, this novel doesn't offer anything new at all. The MC gains a system to make his sect stronger, if he doesn't do it in 100 years he dies.
MC so far uses the in-system purchases to buy charms that temporarily increase comprehension to give people pointers in public to lure in new disciples.
He also used one to temporarily increase his cultivation speed.
So far, meh.
Read it once, read it a thousand times.
This novel offers nothing new, and is only good if you're looking for a wuxia with some overused comedy tropes and clichés.
If you enjoy such things, I am impressed.
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Just from the prologue itself is enough to say that this book is good. I'm not quite the fan like this book's genre but the sypnosis caught my attention. I'm really looking forward to this.
Another sci-fi great that will probably not be chosen. F*ck!
Short review: Very fun setup with good characters and an interesting system.
Long review: The writing is overall decent, but the author shifts around in tense too much to make it a natural read. The story development is excellent, with a good introduction and setting up the stakes from the very first chapter. The characters are very well developed, with distinct features, and their interaction feels natural. I'm not far enough to say a lot about the world-building, but it appears solid, and I'm interested in how the author is going to make the supernatural features fit into an Earth-like world.
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I felt the concept was pretty good. It has potential but the author clearly didn't execute it well.The way the story has developed till here just makes me cringe.The first few chapters we're pretty good. It would've been a great novel if the quality of the translation and writing was consistent.