PratapJi
Unbelievable, just as thought the cheat are pretty good. This novel is centered only on faceslapping, of course it doesn't really bother me normally. But this story spent an entire chapter describing some random mocking MC and another half on MC faceslapping them. ON THE NEXT CHAPTER, IT CONTINUES!!!, chapter dropped, braincell gone, trash confirmed
Story has a good premise, but the writing needs some work.The transition (at least for the first good bit) is very rough, at times contradicting itself, or not making sense.The pacing is wildly inconsistent as well, which makes following along a bit difficult.Lots of unnecessary repetition and/or rewording of information, sometimes for entire chapters.Main character is supposed to be very smart, but does some really stupid things, such as throwing away all his advantages (stealth, range, first attack) to rule-of-cool the boss instead.If you can read though this (and ignore some bizarre world building choices) it looks like it could be fun.
the author did a great job on this one, the mc's character is great and it is developping after his what happened to him,the writing style is great and the plot is written well.give it a try guys , you won't regret it
192 chapters on qidian this includes chapters where he asks for a day off so even less actual content. anyway 192 chapters before he abruptly ends the novel midway into it the author had a plan but couldn't execute it well.
A good read, not very original but good enough to read and expect something new to it. It’s a shame but we’ll need quite a while to know the rest and it hasn’t been picked up yet.
a beautiful story! this one make readers believe in true love all over again! truly an amazing plot and the characters are truly interesting! I can't wait to read more.
El autor es tonto o que?, Se supone que el MC se quiere volver fuerte rápido para no sufrir peligro ni debilidad, pero no mata bestias fuertes para no subir de nivel, hay que tener consistencia en lo que se dice. Un libro así pierde el sentido y ya no es tan interesante.
So, mc pointed his staff at the sky and the sky disappeared. It might take 3,000 chapters for another cultivation novel mc to reach the power that the mc in this novel has, Lol...
Hello my dear future readers, everything ok? Author-san here to give you a super ultra top review, wow, feel honored!
The history basically is of a Magician that was considered the strongest being along with the Dragon King and there he was bored and choose to fight with the Dragon King, both of them perished and he was reborn as a little Yin Snake.
Every being has a Soul Matrix, you can also call it Soul Guide, it show you your name, age, talent and skills/techniques. The story development is going good in my opinion, and yes, there will have harem and for those guys that like incest, no can do.
Ethan (The MC) only have fragment of his previous long life, meaning that his personality will be different yet similar to his previous life, he retained basically all of his cultivation experience such as realms information, alchemy, etc.
This is basically the best I can say to you, I hope that with this review you can get to know better of what my webnovel here will give you, this is not a review which i'm here as the author, but also as a reader, that's it!
Keep up the good work............... ................................................................................................................................ .............
I've enjoyed this story a lot thus far. The story is coming together nicely and the characters are all enjoyable. I look forward to what comes next
This cliche trash gets picked instead of dawn of a new era?!!!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!? Editors choice fucking sucks, the people on this site have **** taste, god of fucking fishing got chosen over it
