PratapJi
After reading the Author's other amazing works, I have found myself hooked onto his newest piece. I have high hopes for this book and knwo this book will BOOM!. The premise isn't anything too extravagant and new but with the Author's craftful writing; this book has great potential! The MC's abilities are also unique and I'm intrigued to see how fast he becomes Op af...Can't wait for more chapters! Keep Writing Author!
It's really interesting to read. It's makes you want to read MORE.(ImasjsbsnjWANTaksbsjsjdbeejsjbdMOREnamsjsnsbsjPLEASEakskskjsksjsjADDalksjsjsjshsnMOREkaksksbdjsksjsIsssssDONT have any thing else to say Why is it not posting???)
This is more like a copy of "swallowed star". It's the same apocalyptic setting. Just like in the SS world, there is also some form of protection barring people from going into outer space. There is also a spaceship that has a robot that talks just like in this. I have read the raw till 177, but it's all reminding me of Swallowed Star. Does anybody else feel the same?
Already in love with the summary
Straight to the point this novel is trash. I really question peoples taste when this dumpster fire that seems like its a fanfic written by a teen gets above 4 stars. The premise of this novel seems decent in theory (even if it is a rip off of fairy tail and D&D). But the author is straight trash at writing even with a decent idea; the translators doing no favors either cause they are pretty bad too, not unreadable but enough to constantly take you out of the story. Anyways if you feel like reading this novel which is practically 90% exposition I won't stop you, but I don't take responsibility for any brain cells lost.
Really inspiring and interesting..I think it'll be the most rated novel in the future. Love Thomas character seems bit funny. Rejected piece hahaha.
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I have nothing to say other than I love this novel I find it amazing and I can relate to it so well at times so please don't drop............
It’s not bad, maybe a bit too fast paced and some more details would be more than welcome about family background, planet / continent and major powers, at least some initial introduction for starters.
I kinda like the Mc tho, he’s not rushing too much and uses his brain but too many things are kept in the shadow (back to details I already mentioned), would like to know more about the “cheat system” itself too and how those skills (… martial art, body s. Tecniques etc…) are coming from … origin/acquired/found/whatever.
Aaand where is the harem!!! Haha jkjk
Would like to know how story proceeds for sure so added to library and looking forward to it.
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This novel has a very interesting concept and story. It is very refreshing to see something like this. The only problem is the author's writing style isn't the best, but I believe it will get better and they will improve tremendously with time.
I liked the first chapters. It moved a bit slow but is the only thing I can say against It. The characters are interesting and there are a few surprises. I like more lighthearted stories bit anyone that likes drama would enjoy it.
