Sometimes words are missing, it feels rushed and careless.The story starts good and stays that way until ca. chapter 35 or 40, not sure.Then fights will take multiple chapters and there will be only fights, no story.Bored I stopped reading.
The MC is so stupid it makes me seem like a genius. He doesn't eve acknowledge the fact that he is in another world, he is very slow and keeps apologising to pre-recorded messages and to things that are just exp bags.
1. I got a dig bick
2. You that read wrong
3. You read that wrong too
4. You checked
5. You smiled
7. You are wandering why you are still reading this
8. You saw that mistake, right?
(On 7)
10. But did you see that I skipped 6?
10. You checked
11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9
12. I said "saw you" not you saw
13. I also skipped 2
14. You got tricked
15. Follow me for exp ;)
16. Give my exp 'novel' a good review with a reminder and I'll leave you another 5 star ;)
17. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
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This book drops you into the action and quickly give the story of a prince who must bring the world to peace (but not before dying repeatedly). The writing is decent and although is only has a few chapters at present, it has a lot of promise!
I have enjoyed the story a lot. Everything flows well and is easy to read. One thing I'm confused about is how the characters get stronger. I don't know if I'm missing something or if it just hasn't been revealed yet. I also hope that this doesn't become a harem. I don't want to see the mc with a bunch of girls. Overall the story is well written and I would highly recommend it.
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the author should check his work or have a editor look it up. it seems some chapters are from a different book of his called agis or something plus he some times gets the main character Jake name mixed up with Leon from the other book.. the whole Stat thing gets kinda ridiculous and over used same with the calling oit of techniques but its tolerable all in all I like the book so far. I think I'm on ch.113 I will continue to read.
Remarkable, Professional, and well-thought-out work, keep it up. Of so much interest is the composition of phrases, hyphens, and commas. The research done is well articulate and modern, in tune with modern reality.
Someone recommended me this book. And I love it ??good luck author,and keep it up ?
This is a good LN. Some odd ways of doing things here and there, but a good novel over all. Well worth the read. I just wish there were more chapters.
The start of the story is good you made her gf accompany him but it all got **** bro when you just make his gf more op than him the concept is good but the development is what can I say slightly bad, it should be better if their power is equal or he is stronger maybe a bit but you made it like the gf is more of a mc than him bye dropping this your progress for him is the slowest of all and his gf is already ahead of him many times than his progress bye bye just hope this will be successful even thoug with all that sht with his gf bye ciao sayonara