Man, it is too short, I'd like for this story to be longer... And tbh it coulda been longer...there is a lot of potential and hard work in that story.
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Well I like the fact the Mc isn't a **** that thinks with his rock and actually wants to advance for a real reason the only problems so far being the chapters, to me there a little to short but still as long as the MC doesn't act like killing a human is ****ed up but killing 100 spirit beast is nothing then we're ok and also hopefully the 2nd doesn't act like a coward and how before spirit hall of he does become a human when the main plot starts (if it's douluo1
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I have only read a few chapters but I can tell the story is off to a really good start, it has a lot of potential, the writing quality is good, the world background is nice even though I am not used to it as yet, overall amazing, keep up the good work.
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This is the first novel i have ever read in which MC is stronger than the system...____________________________________________________________________________
fair play
the writing is so good i almost though the author actually expierenced this!good read unique perspectives magic,fantasy ect pretty good all and all
Hello Readers, or potential ones. I want to mention the fact that the Mc is evil, or more accurately, does very evil things for the sake of his goals. That doesn't mean he doesn't do good things if he feels like it, so long as it doesn't really bother him. However, some have mentioned that my mc is too soft, but if you're patient enough to read to chapter 9-10, you'll find out he's actually very cruel. If you're still not convinced, be patient and read up to chapter 30. That will clear all the doubts you have. It's a wonderful story and I've gotten a lot of wonderful and positive feedbacks more than negative. I just want you to have this in mind before diving in. You're in for a treat, trust me.PS. From the start he is shown to be evil, however do not be surprised if he does some seemingly good acts. You'll soon find that everything revolves around him.
Very interesting and good novel. It will pull you into the story almost instantly and has the potential to be one of the best novels in this platform.
Another Trash.