Very creative for such a young kiddo . You can actually visualize while your reading this story . It’s a very interesting read . Can’t wait to continue reading it .
I'm happy you made a new book. I love the synopsis and characters. This is an interesting masterpiece, and like the rest of your books, will be a masterpiece.
Novel yang menarik bagiku karena rata" Reinkarnator akan selalu berusaha mengubah semua hal yang akan terjadi namun disini MC tidak terlalu banyak mengubah jalan cerita. Sedikit kurang pada novel ini pada penggunaan kata saja seperti kata "saat" Yang terlalu banyak digunakan
Just caught up and story is great it isn't five stars because i feel like you haven't given enough depth the to travis ??????????.
This is humorous and exciting! I actually admire your style in describing scenes and characters. This is really great. I added it to library waiting for more!
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The author is trying to incorporate both fictionnal spiritual energy and normal scientific principles. GOOD points: The story/plot is good. Characters are also neatly fleshed out. Cultivation also seems realistic BAD points: 1.So much plot unrelated to cultivation(like throne mission ,kinda seems like author got bored of his own story and suddenly decided to blow up the whole planet,not that i am complaining ,twist was good but if author already decided to blow up the planet why waste so many chapters on roan and rean planning on how take the throne and also recruiting quira by franden(dont know that names properly) its kinda dragged out.).Some events dont need to explained/dialogued detailed, summary would be fine. 2.Story pace seems to kinda slow.700 CHAPTERS but still both protag only reached nascent soul. 3.And pleasentaries should be cut down.So many dialogues its like a theatre script. 4.Author week point might have been physics. example: in 702 chapter he implied that due to low spiritual energy planet was cooled.Does that even make sense, please i know its fiction but still i felt dumb reading that.spiritual energy is supposed to be neutral how the heck planet started to warm up after spiritual energy restored.I always thought may be planet is so far away that planet was cool. 5.And regarding yin and yang its very confusing.you have mixed several different cultivation systems and its hella confusing.Controlling yin energy to control different yin types of elements?but weren't they absorbing spiritual energy or elements? where the heck did the get only yin energy?.
I had read it and its boring.
its not about the translation being bad, but just over all bad.
Its like a kid wrote this purely out of imagination.
Shameless author here.
I'll definitely give my own book a 5 stars, but I won't think that you'll all do the same, so normally this is where I would try to convince you that it is good, but I won't do that.
It's good, give it a try, you won't regret it.
I didn't read the story (not my style) but I respect the author's passion and perseverance.❤
(Thanks to Google Translate)
READY PLAYER ONE Japan version. Love the story background and settings. A bit of LOG HORIZON elements to make this art more captivating. Thumb up.