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It is good ignore the haters they always hater for no good reason keep going good job
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I could bear with the author's grammar since english isn't his main language but there are too many mistakes in other points.
Romance was very forced to the point that he was already calling the princess of the Yan Empire his future wife after they had just met in a single chapter. He doesn't act like someone who was trapped and ignored by his father for 8 years.
I would continue to read the novel since I like ones with systems but there is no doubt that this novel doesn't can't even stabilize itself.
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Great book, decent speed of plot progression, unique world design, good mc.
Overall a really goos read, and well worth picking up and holding in your library.
Many thanks author!
~Ethan
Love this story,well done. Nice grammar and character building. It is rare to that on webnovel. I hope you it doesn't become a harem. Anyway I hope to see new chapters soon.
Army Building, Business Management, Harem, MC Pevert, War.......................................................................................................
It's a greats story so far, I'm on chapter 6 so I don't really know what up to come on the future chapters when I get there. Gonna be a little surprised :) but I like it so keep up good work!
Best novel of 2020 hands down. Better than Lord of the Mysteries and The Legendary Mechanic. Yet it didn't get enough exposure to the disoriented mob, because the name sounds cliche, and due to the lack of profit, Qidian has shut it down.. and doesn't allow fan translators to pick it up.. FVote ur stones!
reincarnated into his young self: checkwas super cultivator in past life: checkhas super cultivation technique that his past self didnt practice: checkis poor: checkhas grievances in past life: checkhas saved super rich grampa/girl/kid with his awesome medical skills: checkhas saved kidnapped girl: checkracism/nationalism: checkstopped reading: checkoverall so full of cliches that i was going to give it 2. until they started with korean character that goes like: taekwando best, china martial arts crap. if there is something i detest more than lazy cliche writing, it is racism/nationalism inside chinese novels. it is done so badly and one dimensionally that it just portrays authors indoctrinated hatred towards certain nationalities without any validity.
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Classic trashy xianxia modern day only with terrible english to the point that you can't read it. Worst part is the Webnovel admins allowed it to go premium/paid and have privilege. F*ck me
First the were 60 chapters it was awesome then decreased to 5books with 40 chapters we tolerated and continued to critique and read our hearts out then decreased to 4 books with 40 chapters we continued to read but now you've done it not only did u release one book that looks boring.Do u want to incur the wrath of readers?
