I would say the novel has a good potantion / the story is good but you have to make progress in outline of the world /ofcours it's the first chaptre and i'm anticipating more of this novel and it's author /but overall it's a good read do your best !!
Besides some awkward sentences this story was really interesting! I love the take on this horror story. Keep up the work! The only thing this novel really needs is . . . MORE
Good book , not the best of the best but it's quite good and soon enough it will definitely get better and start unfolding all it's plots and the updates could get Better too
This novel really is amazing! I am very advanced in the raw and I must say that it is one of the best novels of this style that I like, the MC really loves to study and does not become a genius overnight unlike his rival (Lin Yujing ) that if she is a genius without a system.
Mr. Editor please choose this book!
Mr. Editor please choose this book!
Mr. Editor please choose this book!
Mr. Editor please choose this book!
Mr. Editor please choose this book!
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Quite interesting story!!! MC tried really hard to be a villain but fate is always against him!!! Very funny story. Give it a try you won't be disappointed.
This story revolves around an 'NPC' that holds a hidden identity of being a reincarnator from earth. He is summoned into a territory and slowly increases his strength by farming and chopping trees. The MC is not overly empathetic nor is he cruel, he's just one of those protagonists that have an OP near impossibly durable personality. The story has a relatively slow pace as it describes almost every aspect of the Mc's life from taking a dump to eating a pear. Don't read this story if your counting on character depth though as the only character with any real depth is the MC. Even most of the beasts in this story have a more "real" personality than the other NPCs.
Brother Sandeep have step upon his own daoist path. a path unique to himself and unknown to many readers!
Invasion of enemie, weapon of destruction and a unique style of writing
A must read
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Good luck
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This is such an amazing story with a beautiful plot. I hope it gets the recognition it deserves! The characters are relatable and the diction is epic.
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