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Overall I'm only reading this because I'm bored. The writing itself is passable however the story lacks depth (Description of the surroundings/world and the character himself) its literally Ayaan does that and this theres no background what so ever.
Although I said the english is passable, would be nice to have the author or an editor to recheck the chapters and make it more smoothly.
Only read 30 chapters so far, but it's a brainless read for me.
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The reason I started reading this novel is because it's rare to see a pirate story that isn't a one piece fanfic and the system and world seems unqiue and with lots of potential.
The reason I did not give 5 star or that one day I may drop it is because the MC hasn't done a single thing that the system hadn't told him to do like (run here) or (say this). This is obviously my personal opinion but I enjoy system type novel where the system only assists the MC and not one where the MC is overly reliant or even subservient to the system.
I hope things will slowly change after a few chapters.
Very interesting and very intriguing plot. The author has created a compelling world with a fantastic lead and co characters. It’s so well written that it’s easy to visualize. From the lead himslef to the fantasy creatures, all are worth reading about. Everything is interwoven so beautifully. A must read.
So, a novel that’s been “inspired” by Long Live Summons. Well, I’ll be interested to see if this is another Xianxia: I Can Download Fully Leveled Abilities, or if its own thing.
Poor guy, sees the love of his life getting married to another guy and then gets hit by a truck and has his face smashed in. Then he goes to a cultivation world. Oh and be becomes a woman lol. Well, seems like an interesting start, lets see where it goes from here.
I like it and hope it gets picked.............................................................................................................................
I am enjoying the book i love the direction its going plus the characters are really great i hope the book continues and who doesn't love fruits ;)
This is my second comment about this novel. Just finished Volume 1. It is easily one of the top novels in the original section. You can feel the LOTM influence especially during the scenes where MC is thinking a lot. But, at the same time only real talent can let you write this. This story develops in it's own way and I'm so happy for that.
Good introduction, the meeting between the protagonist and mentor was humorously rendered. The plot develops quickly and there are endnotes to guide the reader so that they won't be too overwhelmed by the many new cultivation terms. Lots of action and some smooth moves were depicted too. (YY clap was pretty cool)
HONESTLY WOW. not a lot of times you get adaptations from African culture and mythology in this platform especially, curiosity lead me into opening the book, and the tools irl have been beautifully utilised by Sam, wish this were a book, pretty darn different concept, but you gotta read it carefully and find time because THE DETAILS MATTER the author hints it (or maybe I'm trynna analyse too implicit details lol)