Really spearman. Ugh. In a vast new era with foreknowledge of new events and magic, you go with spearman. Lame.
It has been a year, please update. I love to read more!
Alex did this then Alex did that, Alex was the only one in the room but I have to say his name before I tell you what he’s doing because you might not know it’s Alex. What are in the third grade? Still cool story.
Generic fantasy story, but unique take with the seven ancestors in a crystal
Another fun system based Story to read[img=thinking]
I am not used to write reviews on the stories I read but I will make an exception for this one , This story is great almost an hidden gem ! Their is a system but not the usual and cliche one , the characters and the main one are very uncommon I like this story too because of the unusual type of world, this is a grey-dark world where everything is clearly not all pink, I really want to read more to see the development of the characters and the evolution of the novel !
Are you actually serious 55 locked chapter ????
That's soooo ridiculous other novels have up to 12 locked chapter. This is acceptable but 55 is just greedy.
Well, This one novel is the the one that i truly don't know what to say!
Right, I Don't know what to say and only laugh at it.
Reading it to the current last chapter(20) i only feel laughing to Death.
First of all i must say that as a truly newbie noob Writer, Author Tried his best to this point and i happy for him BUT the problem is that Almost many of these Friends of ours have lacking in the foundational matters like comprehension Meaning of Cultivation , Skill , Character Design and Storyline. In my view being an new Author Doesn't means that They can have problems in even storyline and story.
Lacking in grammar aspect
Lacking in Descriptions of Events and scenes
Lacking in Creativity
Lacking in Storyline and Events
Lacking in Foundations.
Author doing this in as Hobby. Or at least i didn't he wants anythings So there are not many problems for he continue this as he's gaining Experience. Author please first of all create your events better, we hardly can grasp what happen in every events. then if your writing this so please put more time on it and at least do cultivation and missions properly.
zZCandyZz rated this 5 stars 18 times, so don't get mad when I rate this 1 star 3 times. Anyways, this is just a novel of a beta cuck MC, so if you're into that then this is the novel for you.
It ’s good but if I was the mc I will never forgive the heroins like they did to much u just can’t forgive them like that.
But nice story
Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash
Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash
Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash
Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash
literally a scam, the moment you get past the free chapters the translation quality drops, characters change names every chapter, sometimes changing multiple times in a chapter it's just so unpleasant to read.