Firstly, the story is interesting and we feel the author put a lot of efforts to create a complex and complete world. The characters are not yet well developped, BUT this is because there is not yet enough material to do so (only 16 chapters at the moment), and we can see there will be character developments soon in the future. The MC is OP but restricted with the use of his power, which will give a good development of the story.Secondly, the author has a good writing, english is not my first language but I can see there is not (or very little) gramatical/spelling/conjugation error.So I really recommend to read this story if this is the kind you like (of course everyone has their own tastes)
I have truly been looking for a novel like this.
A novel with a genius protagonist set in a modern world with minimal supernatural events involved.
The writing quality is excellent, the stability of updates is alright, though I would rather have a chapter a day than 2 chapters every 2 days, the story development has been splendid so far as well, the character design is nice and the world is to my liking.
All in all, very good.
Please do continue writing.
Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA
So excited to know the behind the mystery
Ok so the story starts out as a transmigration with a system to ancient Poland. It's a good idea but the way it works out and is pretty boring and the main drawn of the system is barely used and not even defined. Right now we know barely anything about the system. There is no info on how he levels if there are levels, we know he gets xp from crafting but I guess no xp when he kills anyone we dont know his stats but we know he has them. The whole system thing is laid out like a wiki, it gives him info and that's about it oh and it can auto brew. It is supposed to be able to craft for him but he never uses it but to make beer. I mean what is the use of a system if he doesn't use it or hell the author never defines what it actually is or what it can do totally or what ways he can get xp. So ya the system to me is just a hook to get people that like them to the story and just enough to seem like there is a system. Just a few chapters in the romance entanglement starts which is crazy. The guy knows he only has a few months before the king runs away and all heck breaks loose and instead of setting stuff up thoroughly he spends 100 chapters play romance politics, yes het gets 2 towns out of it but damn 100 chapters of it and he has just made 1 brewery. I swear the author wants to have sex with his horse, he spends so much time describing the horse and putting his head to the horses you are just waiting from him to kiss the beast and way to much sex chapters for this type of story, I mean like 4 chapters to explain smut. Anyway the story is a disappointment and it's about to go premium. I wish the guy luck but i dont think many readers will hang around, in my opinion it's not worth paying for. The guy puts a lot of work and research in but for what its supposed to be it's just disappointment.
Our MC is reborn and gets straight down to business. There is so racist cliches early on, which seem to be stereotypical part of these novels. The pacing is fast and well developed. Not my cup of tea, but give it a go!
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A masterpiece that combines both godlike worldbuilding and prose that would make Shakespeare blush, a perfect 10/10 work that seems as if it was crafted by God Almighty himself Also, I highly recommend listening to the Nutshack theme whilst reading, for it is the only piece of music on our mortal coil that can rival this work in its perfection, and thus is its perfect companion to further enhance the experience
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