Another story with an interesting premise but bad writing. The author doesn’t understand the concept of flow, so the writing is very choppy as a result. And the writing itself seems like it was probably written by a young teen. I would recommend passing on this one.
First few chapters are a bit slow but after chapter 4 it picks up the pace. my only complaint with the system is with the skill levels(1-10 was beginner then it became elementary but continued to level 11 , personally i think it should have just started over as elementary level 1) but other than that it’s a really good novel.
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I find it hard to understand how the story can have 4.9 stars. I haven't read anything innovative, very funny or very cool, in addition to being very childish in the beginning of the story and the cliché of the child who beats adults to protect a girl...
Maybe this book deserves a better score but thanks to a worse than MTL level of translation even 1 star is a lot for this. Webnovel please fix your translation and editorial work
What an interesting story, the pace of the chapters are also good, we just need more chapters... Advice to the author, you can try reading some other author's stories, you could gain more ideas.
Just finished reading the first 20 chapters, and I gotta say, it's a mixed bag. The MC being a Special Ops soldier in a magical world is cool, but he's kinda inconsistent. Sometimes he's cautious and cold, other times he's easily swayed by strangers. The military system has potential, but it needs more explanation and detail. Also, the MC should question his surroundings more instead of just accepting things.Overall, it's not terrible, but there's room for improvement. Hoping it gets better in later chapters. Keep it up, author!
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Okay first off, this novel is amazing. I love the way the plot has developed and everything. Second, there is animated video called the court jester animated by Alpas[The 7th end] and it's scarily similar to this in the story it tells, and its really cool.
Guess I shouldn’t have expected much after reading your last novel. You seem to project your loser personality into your MC’s. Neither of them are the strong ones in the relationship.
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