Lovely story... the mystery in the story is pretty interesting actually and the writing skills is pretty smooth and explain everything in details in a simple form the background story and the characters caught my attention full of actions , great job author keep it up
I recommend you all starting at (Arial) volume 2 new and improved besides (Jane and Stacey) volume 1. The reason I say this is because each chapter don't have much words in it in volume 1 but it's still fun to read if you want to read it.
Originally this was supposed to be about characters in diffrent time and dates in this world. So I’m going to try to focus on one character so to not to confuse the readers and make it easier on myself with all the character developments.
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Maganda po yung story nyo
Naiyak po ako HAHAHA ngayon lang po ako nagbasa dito e sa wattpad po talaga ako nagbabasa tapos nakita ko ito tapos sobra ko pong nagustuhan yung story nyo
5 Stars straight up. I love stories that incorporate Cultivation, VR and reincarnation genres. Those three are in my top five genres. I only hope it doesn't go on hiatus any time soon.
the first chapter opening with a war scene.. it's a nice start actually.. I have read all the chapters highly recommended Good luck author,
Too. Much filler speaking same thing in 10 different ways does not make it sound exp. Starting till middle was good but now it's like ****. The story is good but for each small climax one needs to wait more than 6 months to have few quality exp chapters and the rest are fillers which are expanded to fill slacks/laziness. Like nov,2019 end there was a series of few good chapter and now it's Almost April we are waiting for its continuation. Each chapter 80-85 % is filled with author narration how mc shits only 10% accounts to real development and that to is a filler. I am not saying the story is bad but you must be a follower of mad_snail to give good score. Sure it has unexpected twist and turns even few exp chapter for which author keeps us thirsty for half a year, yet we are his ***** still waiting for few exp that send our dopamine to high. So the is both loved and cursed, but what can we he is doing for $ and I agree it is difficult to make stiff exp chapter/turns every now and then. But its earnest request to author to please reduce the amount of your monologue to make the story not be hated by readers.
The story is structure and Quality wise absolutely up there. Even if a few more position marker for scene changes would be nice.
The bad rating has therefore only one major reason and that is the lack of the correct Tags for the story or a mention in the Description.
I don't know at what point the story is to be comedy or Romance. All I found was, Tragedy, Heartbreak. As Beta Simp of an MC, depiction of Torture or Abuse.
At no point do the Tags mirror this, i normally stay away from those story's because I don't like this over dramatic plot.
So is the story bad? No for a Dark - Romance type of story it would be ok, but it not what I was locking for and not what I wanted
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Couldn't read anything. there are no preview chapters. so I don't know if I want to read the story and sick around. you got to pay starting at chapter one. author forgets this is webnovels not e-books or Amazon books... =,(
I like the Man CHaracter very much. He very handsome. Upload more chapter please. I'm waiting for the new chapters. More chapter. More chapter. More chapter. please.