11 chapters in 5 days! That's pretty good update rate. The story development and pacing is good. The world background is interesting. MC transmigrating into another world with advanced tech/knowledge has me anticipating! Great work!
? Saw thid on feature and thought to give it a try. Amazing writing and hope this story gets the attention it needs. The author deserves it. I hope that athena will succeed. I feel for her. Author, try to update more.????????????
One of the best novels here. Not as good as Kings Avatar, but still good. The only thing that is lacking is overall plot motivation. But characters are good, humor is funny, arcs are interesting
It is one of the interesting but slightly too stupid novels. It indulges deeply in clichés and turns ever more nationalistic. This got ever worse until it can just not be stomached anymore, specially directly promoting Chinese tyranny going much further than just downplaying it as many novels do or have to do.
5 star for no westernizations. Webnovel, nationalism is still nationalism even if you change the country.
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Why do you keep it in Trial read only to remove it? It was the most supported book yet it was not picked and you guys picked some shitty novels. I really am thinking of leaving this platform...... Why just can't you pick this book?
Typical Cultivation and Transmigration Novel. Started off fine, but MC is still referred to as Andy. I dont care that was his previous worlds name and he doesnt feel like he belongs in this world. If the setting has only chinese names, adapt your MC to have a chinese name. If he wanted to pay homage to his name Andy here is a good name for you to use. An Di. Faking his suicide and adapting a new name is a good plot point. Since he doesnt want to be around that clan its good to be out on his own as he knows the story and its plot. But seriously to use an English name and no one thinks that it isnt weird?Had to drop because the name Andy was in nearly every paragraph each chapter. Very hard to get into a story that is supposed to be Chinese Cultivation but somehow isnt due to a single word.
Overall its a decent story with nice background and characters sadly i find the story development lacking but its not all that bad, however the worst part about this novel is writing or rather the grammar part... I don't think i need speak more about how horrible the grammar is.
As far as I have read ch 80 the book seems to be good and the chapter releases are not too slow to be dropped so you can start reading without any apprehension. Also the way the story is written and translated is very good. But I personally feel the story lacks a direction and the "System" part is the only one holding it together.
It started out with a bit of cliche, but this novel soon took a better more unique turn, haha, author-saman I've already found out that plot twist of yours but I won't dare share it with anyone, you did a really got job at masking it in chapter two haha. I even saw that someone else in the comments had found out. Anyways, back the review, in this story, characters ask questions, they won't go around killing you for just some random reason, every character have a story even the bad ones, the world feels rich enough due to authors writing style and descriptions, and there aren't any useless paragraphs, even when the peanut gallery is speaking their talking about useful content with the exception of those that have only one or two lines meant to add flavor.The supporting characters are as they called, supporting, they aren't useless and weak, even a so-called certain fatty, has his place, his own purpose and motivations, and skills. A fighting fatty :)As for the MC, I like his abilities, I won't go spoiling them here, it's pretty nice to see this kind of ability for a change. Still, while their are good points, there are still some downsides which I think can be improved over time, other than that, author-sama, well done.
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