"Sorry, but I'm very busy writing and pitying myself."
Touma was shocked and excited by the sight of the Hyuga compound. There are a lot of kids with black hair and white eyes running around. He sensed that there were only a few powerful shinobi inside, probably due to the ensuing war. The shinobi left were probably the main core of the family. Mitsune pulled Touma towards a big courtyard on the left side of the compound.
tsume: there are rumors that there are problems in your mission ...
"G' morning little miss fluffybutt." Zeph bent down to give Rin her morning scratches.
Told in Micheal's P.O.V.
Boom!
Silk took the key from the enchantment and with it, space seemed to tear.
Interesting premise, I don't mind that it borrows from Fallout and other apocalyptic genres. World building is so-so, doesn't delve much into it even past Chap 90.Major problem with character development. MC is pretty useless, has no redeeming qualities/talents/virtues. It's fine if MC just wants to be rich and successful, but it keeps ****** you wonder why MC is randomly being given this opportunity to cross worlds and borrow technology/resources from each side. He is only a human mule moving resources between worlds.We empathize with all protagonists because there's something in them that resonates with us, or that we aspire to be (hardworking, etc). This MC has nothing. When he becomes rich, his parents are completely ignored (or at least omitted from the novel), just many many MANY chapters of self-gratification.MC laters ends up just thinking with his d**k and collects women for no other reason than just because he can. MC constantly thinks to himself that he should stop. Then he keeps collecting more women. It also wander into loli/semi-pedophilic areas, probably from the sexual fetishes of the author and readers (around chap 85+). I think there are plenty of ***** novels around if people are into that. Pretty lame to see it here.
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reviewing for the fast passes so do ignore my review
positives: -cute-acceptable sadness and melancholy-the numbers are correct enough in regards to themselves and the story that i did not notice anything wrong -author seems smart-cute againnegatives:-liu shu sleeps/is out of commission and story too often-too much focus on side? characters (these two are different complaints)-fate/luck are prominent in the story
There are only a few chapters but the stroy is very engaging and i like it. Filled with a lot of mysteries and I am a huge fan of legends???? looking forward to more.