I really loved the way author introduced a new type of story.
Good story! MC never retreats in the face of difficulties, actively thinks about problems, and solves one problem after another, making it very comfortable for me to read!
(I have read up to chapter 12, which is currently the newest chapter.)Honestly I cant find anything to critique here, gramar is very good, with rare mistakes which are usualy very minor, characters are pretty good, with an interesting dinamic between the various OG protagonists.Overall, this is definitely in my raidar now, I suggest you give this novel a try!
I really wanted to like this novel but it lost its charm the more I continued to read . I love the starting of the story but somewhere between Ch 150 - Ch 200 I felt so bored reading it so I stopped . I loved the MC because he had the brains and he acted logically , he knew how to survive and was clever but as the story progressed he started to act like other typical novel MCs . His interaction with Yang Xiaoxin just made me cringe , its just a personal opinion but I find Yang Xiaoxin annoying . The way Ren Xiaosu keeps on dragging Jiang Wu and her students around on his escapes is honestly difficult to read . So its not that I hated the story , it's good but I won't be reading further . If you're thinking of reading it go ahead , it's a great novel ,you might enjoy it :)
This is how you do a system novel. Very enjoyable and the author does a great job setting up the world and the characters before simply throwing the protagonist into the gaming world. Excellent world building, the author paints a picture so vividly of a fictional society in the near future. The protagonist is also a well-rounded character one can feel sympathy for. One who has had a bit of a rough go, losing his parents and floating through life without any real purpose. I look forward to seeing how he handles the gaming world. The story is also very well written and flows nicely, making for an all round enjoyable reading experience. Great effort!
I'm caught up with the Translations. I am sure I'm not the only one who waited years for this Novel to translate. I was very confused at first and thought it had similarities until I realize it was actually "All Things Wrong." I thought this would be a crafting novel.
I won't speak out of bias since I still don't know whether this novel is good or not but from what I can see everything is well written so far. Mysterious plot, hilarious cast of characters, and loving this MC.
I'm still uncertain what the Author trying to do but I hope there's Romance with 'Misty Rain' as you can see potential development. At first, she was cold but slowly warming up to MC.[img=coins]
I also hope the Author utilizes his characters well. That's a big flaw in VR Chinese novels. They start off good but then become something stupid later. (Take it from experience)[img=exp]
[It's funny just two days ago before this came out, I found this novel in my history which made me feel a bit regret. But now it suddenly came back on this website. I can't help but think of it as fate lol]
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I'll just get to the point, the characters do too much unnecessary things, and sometimes they even do things that is contrary to what they stated in earlier chapters, the plot is overly used and the pacing is too all over the place, the characters make unusual choices and the main character is apparently the narrator, it gets boring in about 10 chapters in because of too much dialogue and stupid choices, albiet author did avoid adding too much cliche moments but i cant vouch for the other mistakes, the translation is also... i dont knoe sometimes bad sometimes good, like theres times where it goes from 100iq english then drops to -100 in the span of 1 paragraph
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