Hello!! First off all I very happy and pleased to seen an Indian Author, as I am a fellow Indian myself.?So, regrading the novel.TBH, have a mixed thoughts about it. I really like the Eshwar(Protagonist) and also the side character who have their own and unique personalities.Well in the end character design was good.But can't be said same for the story though.Don't get me wrong, the story is good and it has its moments, but what I am saying is the lack of confirmation from Author to the readers and it looks to much complicated.(especially his past life stuff and the reason behind his current mental problem, he will be going through occasionally)Well atleast thats what I felt or more like I am someone who prefers clarifications while reading particularly, about MC's state.Despite the above mentioned my opinion, I atleast enjoyed the novel and had a constant smile while reading through the chapters.Anyway, liked ur work Dear Author hope you will continue.Note: This review is posted after only reading 140 chapters. NOT DROOPED. Only Paused. Will continue Later.
I'm sort of confused by some parts since I don't really read sci-fi books but it's a nice book overall. Nice work author. It's going in my collection. ????
A good beginning but the writing is a little stilted because of translation and there is very little character development of the MC or supporting characters.
because someone asked and corrected my novel, so I made this statement. I have fixed the synopsis, hopefully it will be easier to understand.
let me tell you a little plot. so actually there are two story lines, from 2 different novels. one is EEWAO and another is New World which I haven't published yet. the stories of the two novels are interconnected and when EEWAO is finished I will publish New World novel that I myself feel is very very good, because there are lessons in history, culture and so on from all over the world.
I created EEWAO to remember my game friends and improve the quality of my writing before I published New World. so I hope when I make New World, the quality will be better. btw I am still learning to write, so your review is very useful for me.
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Good one having a interesting boy story with a different story which found me really interested.
This boy having good bussiness mind setup and a good characteristics towards others
I am getting confused while reading. Where is the demon lord now? I want him back
Hey man I'm popping out over 10 chapters a day so far I think I'm doing pretty good for my first time writing a novel look at me now mom lol
Although goose five did a fairly good job with immortal mortal, I'm really disappointed with this book. It completely lacks direction, I can't relate with the plot or logic, the mc personality lacks depth and doesn't leave a lasting impression. The plot would have been great but it was rushed and there's still a lot of things to explain like, why do cultivators need planes, how come a sixteen year old is the greatest doctor in the entire kingdom. What kind of person expresses grief by ransacking is own corpse so wantonly and why would a rift just suddenly appear after a "rich" kid was digging herbs and found a rock which makes him get struck by lighting. IT JUST DOESN'T MAKE SENSE!!!!!! ??????evaluation: TRASH!
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do not use I have a child with my smartphone or a war zone in my life I don't think it's the best option for me and my kids are you and I felt like you