I like the story and all but translation went downhill starting in ch 171.I like the story and all but translation went downhill starting in ch 171.
The author is, after reading some similar material, trying their hand at writing a story of their own. It is very interesting what concepts the author likes to borrow.
That being said, I know that it's cool that they have borrowed ideas from the novels they have, are and will be reading and translating such as Eliza, EDCL (experimental... lich), NEET and etc.
I praise the author for starting with the rough rock, that which I previously have mentioned in a comment, and working to make this a gem! I looking forward to working, reading, enjoying, being with the author every step of the away.
It may seem a little bland at first but I believe the author can and is able to twist this previously precedents into their own unique twist and style
Sincerely and yours truly,
Sir. Tentacles Shrubs
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Could get past chapter 50 or so. Too over the top. Supreme beings fighting and killing millions which added nothing to the story. The author substituted excessive destruction for actual plot. If you like movies or books where the world is almost destroyed then you might like this.
Very interesting plot and interesting concept.
The character seems cool and system 0 is really snarky.
I really like the timeline-jumping concept.
The only thing that I felt could have been done better is to fix the grammatical errors but that can be fixed using something like Grammarly so no real harm done,
Boring and mc is idiot someone try to kill him in his team but still stay and act like nothing happened and in title where is the evolution of beast and the problem too is his beast grow too fast without resources but no one cares
I really enjoy it so far. you could do alot with it i hope you add more chapters soon[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
I am reviewing my own story. I recommend you give it a try. it is a story of a guy who gets stronger by eating an exotic beast in a parallel world. I hope that you will like it.
Great novel. Buuuuut, main character should take more example on Yours Trully. Of course, with a better ending. That one was a big mess.
Anyway, I was just passing by, call me Lin Ren.
Apart from a few grammatical errors, I have to say that the story so far is hilarious and intriguing in my opinion.
The characters remind me of an anime where the mc shouted a lot but is still extremely loveable.
Although it's still in it's begining stages, I think this story has the potential to make it big (人 •͈ᴗ•͈)
Definitely love the world background and the story development as the chapter goes on. And as for the MC, at least he's got some determination to push through with what life throws at him.
if you can correct your typos and, have this on par with blood warlock and a better werewolf story than MWS then i do my best to support this novel