A good read, enjoyed the storyline
Bro the MC name is different than from the synopsis lmao
read up to the 4th chapter so far. nothing new or unexpected(yep seems all 2nd generation young masters are r@pists who claim a woman for themselves as easily as picking objects at store, no wonder feminists hate men lol)
Hmm, as the guy who translates this, thought I'd put in a review. Let me just say this novel might seem cliche in the beginning, but it's definitely a story that grows on you. On the plus side, the author rarely or close to never drags things out, and always keeps the readers blood boiling for the MC!
To all those haters of QI, you can hate all you want, but please don't down vote the novel just because you hate QI. The novel doesn't deserve that!
YAYAYAYAYAYAYA!!! AQUA MAN HERE HE COMES
ok, this sounds cool, but when he says there are plenty of fish on the sea does he mean that metaphorically or does he mean literally. Quite concerned he is gonna spoon my future food.
Awesome story author-chan
Keep up the good work
"keep a smile on your face"
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Update if you want too
(i like this story very much Especially the female mc i even try to match her up with the males on the story)
It's a Great book. Honestly, has the potential to be top 100. If only you didn't put the paywall so soon, I'm sure more people would have picked it up. I was lucky that this book was offered to me for free for 24 hours, so I made it deep enough to actually be absorbed in the story. You should've leave the first 20 chapters to be free so reader can really get a taste of how it's going to be. Not to mention, you picked a very unique genre.
Anyway on to the actual review,. I give you huge props on Story Development and Character Development. Granted when it comes to wrestling, I do enjoy the actual match itself rather than the buildup, so it's fun to see it from a different perspective.
Your character development in Brent, Rob and Dacey is awesome, especially in the later chapter. And what I love the most is how 'weak' Rob is. He is a proper underdog that actually rising without a cheat but sheer hard work. Unconsciously, you made interesting conflicts that normally would've been pushed aside in this type of novels.
Now is there a flaw?
Maybe a bit slow. But in all fairness at Rob's current position, I do understand the extreme details
Also good couple btw
So am I the only person who thinks the MC is stupid.
A candy drops from a little girl what do do you do???
Oh i don't know maybe eat it
Interesting so far
Long ass title. Check
Over used words including but not limited to,
Dragon
Legendary
God
Time and Space
Destruction
Heavenly Overlord
Cauldron. Check
The imperfect number 9. Check
This story has what it takes to join the ranks of cliche harem novel.
A heads-up before my review, I only read a fair amount of the translation. Most of it was in the raws. The reason for my low score is due to quality drop in the untranslated portion. An important note is that the translator is splitting up chapters, as seems to be common on WebNovel nowadays. So expect the chapter count of anything I mention to be at least double in the translation.
The story starts off fairly slow and uncreative. However, as more characters are introduced, and they start new simulations, the story improves a lot. It's fairly interesting to see how the characters change the timeline, as well as how their actions influence each other.
There is a downside to this though, as the author likes to repeat a lot of the things that happened on previous attempts. It's obviously just padding/filler. He also drags on when talking about the rewards characters get for completing the simulations.
At this point, I'd still give the novel a good ol' 4 stars (which is a good score).
Unfortunately, after around 210 chapters (raw), the author suddenly had what appears to be writer's block. For a while, I thought he dropped the novel entirely, but he just released chapters sparsely. It would have been better if he went on hiatus.
I got to a little over 240 chapters before giving up. It was over 30 (non-split up) chapters of tens of thousands of year time skips in the simulation with no explanations of any story events going on, rewards are exaggerated, presented in a troll-like way, and outright skipped, and basically everything in the real world is people being amazed at the various characters group.
This isn't an exaggeration like people like to do about cultivation novels. This is LITERALLY ALL that happens during those 30 chapters. Absolutely nothing about the simulation world is explained in that time, just literally "several thousand years later, she broke through. Several thousand more years later, she was surrounded and killed". No names are even mentioned in the simulation aside from their real names. Rewards say things like, "an insane, insane, insane amount of spirit stones. Amounts beyond all belief. Amounts that would make an entire city of people satisfied for generations. A city, do you know just how much that is!?" In the real world, nobody past Nascent Soul has been seen or heard of, so once everyone reaches those levels, along with their rewards, there is no threat. The author doesn't bother to introduce any either, so nobody dares to do anything aside from marvel at their growth.
Even worse, it doesn't seem like this would change anytime soon. It deserves absolutely only 1 star at that point. So giving this story 3.0 for a good first arc seems more than fair. Maybe even a little generous for people who prefer ratings to represent the entire novel.
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