I'll be utterly honest, I was like, a little bored when I started... actually, I thought I was not good.but going further, stuffs began to happen. and I find myself eager for more.I particularly like Pato.there's still room for improvements, but believe it's going to get better as we journey.
Speed down the pace of your story a bit, and add more conversational depth between the characters. Otherwise pretty good plot and have a potential to shine. Keep up the good work!
Amazing story so far just a bit confused with his abilities are what level they are.try to write an auxiliary on the ignisis abilities.cant say much about the world background but it's only the start.And if your having writers block just read novels or manga that revolve around animal or best evolution.keep up the good work.
I‘ll be honest, i‘m doing it for the free tickets
rawr u like its 9/10 i hope story like this have mamy chapter
The story already had me hooked when I read in the synopsis that Jason’s a chill dude. ?
This book is amazing and addicting. It mixes the Bridgestone, Harry Potter and in a way hunger games all in one in a werewolves universe. I really love it. It’s not one sided you have some twist and turns and some serious steammmm. Thank you ! It’s my first book by this author and it pushes me to try the others. Biggest compliment: this book pushed me to unlock the chapters as fast as possible, I highly support this author! great work !!
I wasn't expecting much... but now I need more
I don’t usually like school setting but this story was quite interesting. Enjoyed every minute of it.
Hiii Xinfeng, I just came across The Strong One Who Walked Out of the Mental Hospital not long ago and it really caught my eye?! I happen to be a digital artist and If you’re ever interested in commissioning a cover or scene for your story, please feel free to reach out. I’d really loove to work with you on your characters!❤️❤️?
It's an intriguing story with well writtencharacters. I highly recommend it.
the writing I can feel and feelings one can almost relate to.I love your writing style buddy.