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Novel story and char dev and other things are good. I hope this gets updated more regularly.I love this novel.
I like the novel is nice to see an MC different from the rest one that was not a loser before everything went out of ****, volume 1 can feel somewhat overwhelming on some occasions but in general it is a great story, I hope from the heart that does not end abandoned c:
Writing quality is good with almost no mistakes. But the story development is a bit dull for me. On the other hand the characters and fight scene are awesome. Maybe you will be improving the story more in the future or it has something up in the sleeves. But for now we can only wait for more chapters.
hey there, I actually found this story because of the deal with ben 10: ultimate predator's update requirement, I was just going to leave a few comments without actually reading the story just to get new chapters for ben 10, but the more I read this story I got so engrossed in it that i forgot to leave comments ?but seriously author if you're reading this, i love your works and have actually added many of them to my library, and this became one of my favorites as well, my only complaint would be the info dumps but iIdon't really mind.thank you for your hard work, keep it up ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Everything that could be better with the story in my opinion I'm only in Chapter 13.First, you should download Grammarly if you don't already have it because there are spelling mistakes, "or" you could also use virtualwritingtutor.com.Second, the dialogue is weird. You would try rephrasing some sentences because it doesn't sound natural. This would be better for readers to get immersed in the reading.Third, you could try explaining more things because I kinda got confused about how he knew all this stuff.Fourth, you kinda add some unnecessary words in the sentence this makes it feel unnatural. Fifth, some of the dialogue is kind of cringe this is my opinion Idk if any others think this.Overall I'm liking the story so far.
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This is a good story. I LIKE IT. YOU CAN ALSO PROCEED TO READ IT. THAT'S ALL MY FRIEND. Oh yes, did you know that e-sports is major theme of this novel?
I am early on in this book and I am really enjoying it so far! The world design is really interesting and characters Are enjoyable. I am looking forward to seeing how the story progresses!
I'm sorry to give 2 star rating only. The story is interesting to be honest, it's enough for someone who don't have anything to read. But.... And Once again but... Because of the translation take a dive down, I have no choice to drop it. If you want to read, then read until chapter 170, the later chapter are translated with MTL.
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