Hey Author...
The story is good...
has good potential, but MC too overly prideful. doesn't want to accept help, assistance, advice, suggestions of ANYONE, but wants people to accept his help and tutorage.
it's like author made frame of story then started writing and connecting plots forcely
you will not see any emotions, if you want power mc who only go and defeat villains in one strike an pick up girls like picking stones then its for you
i read chapter upto 71
I thought I would drop this book after reading the first chapter but the plot and twist of the story got me already hooked. its a nice book to read and I love the story line.
Can't believe this was put on break just after the trial read, this is the second novel I've seen this happen to that I've had my eye on, might as well just delete it
A all together well that thought out novel with very minimal errors in both grammar and spelling. Overall the system is very good and non of the arcs are given enough time to slow down the plot or become stale. A little OP from the get go with his system but overall a fantastic work by a phenomenal author.
** More Chapters Plz
this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up
5 stars for the cover!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Best of luck
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A funny novel but low updates
At least 7 ch week should be schedule also till now i only found one fault ie age of cultivators
Its too much
That's very good. He struggles to become the ruler with the help of the NPCs and his friends. The story is very interesting. I like it. ❤️❤️
I like your work Author and hope you don't stop writing until the very end. But i think you shouldn't write one fight with many chapter. Max 3 ideal and if you would increase it is killing the hype. It is just a thought and you shoul write your own story. I hope i can see the end of this beautiful story. Again thanks for the book.