Very interesting novel. Good beginning story, solid character building, and nice interactions between characters. Can't wait to see how the story progresses. Keep up the good work, author!
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Honestly, I am really annoyed. A really good idea with lots of potential wasted by braindead author and by extension, braindead mc. Mc truly “loves” his girlfriend, yes he “loves” her so much that he didn’t even bother searching how to cure her with his omniscient system that can he can search anything up with. No, all he thinks about is creating “perfect accidents” so as to get revenge. What a waste of potential.
This is such a great novel. If you like pure evil MCs, this is a great read. The MC is cold, callous, manipulative, and truly knows himself and is true to his desires. The plot is great if you love a bit of gore, killer stuff, and the talk about how fragile people truly are. The plot also has a nice pace, not too fast or slow in my opinion. The world is getting built slowly but it’s going great so far for only 50 chapters. And I can’t say much about the update stability as well but I hope it updates soon with a notice or something soon because this is great. I hope you’re healthy and safe, author!
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writing quality starts off good in the first few chapters then it devolves to monkey trying to figure out how to open a banana to eat it because the editing is nowhere in sight
Another waste of time novel.The more you read the less sense it makes. Don't waste your time on this dumba** novel. There are like 10 novels with the same lame a** copy paste plot,one worse than each other.
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First I'm now impressed with the good English and sentence phrasing of this novel, it's like a poem. Explaining the Romantic relationship between MC and her bae through poetic words is another level. Other than that the world setting is futuristic you can empathise with MC, why he is so much involved with emotions or memories.
So far i've only read the 20 chapters available so i can't speak much about the novel, my only complaint currently would be certain translation choices, the term Budo for example, also in one chapter spears are called guns.
It's easily the best of this batch of trial reads and i can totally see the future potential of the novel, it's not like some trial reads where the MC is already near the strongest around in 40 chapters.
There is no racism if there are no other countries ... at least at the beginning, there is only Huaxia and/or Chinese civilization ... you read right Chinese civilization, not Earth civilization...
I feel like those officers should be more interested in why the 8 year old is working instead of in school than how busy it is. Is anyone going to talk about child labor or call the cops or something? Age him to 16 and this whole story works a lot better. Good though.