The grammar is not up to par…. Don’t waste your time reading this, it’s an okay read if you literally have nothing else to read. So like I said, just don’t waste your precious time on this novel.
I have to applaud the authors capability of capturing every detail in the scenery so flawlessly. It is so well written that I can't help but picture the events in my minds eye. The plot twist at the end of chapter 1 is unexpected if you didn't read the blurb, but I love it. This genre isn't usually at the top of my favourites list, but this book sure is.
This is well thought out, and the sentence is also well structured. It piques my interest as I continue to read. I am asking myself a lot of questions. I love it and I will continue reading. Highly recommend this.
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This story is amazing. I liked that I could easily picture the scenes.[img=gift]
This novel was good,, ,I don't knw why the author left it incomplete
I'm really enjoying this story morning it does have adult content but it doesn't Focus only on that there is a story behind it and there are other things going on author jumped through time a little bit at one point and it made it a bit hard to follow but since then it's been in chronological order which might just be a personal issue I have trouble following ones that jump around a lot so maybe that's my issue more than anyone else I think his character design is good but I think it could be better it needs to be fleshed out a little bit more in some places main character seems to be okay for the most part and some of the other characters he didn't spend enough time with so maybe that's part of the issue as well I think he'll be going back to them eventually the main character will see them again and maybe we'll get more information then but there's a lot of questions left which isn't a bad thing if you're trying to make things a mystery but it's something that frustrates me that's all the world seems interesting I'm hoping he's going to start learning more about the world cuz it seems like there's levels to the world and he's been put into a lower one now but I'm not sure on how that works yet hasn't been touched on very much I'm hoping now that he's at the school I know he's a Slave but I'm hoping he will learn more now that he has access to the library and so on I'm looking forward to the story continuing and while I wish it updated more it is very stable like it's pretty consistent with how much it updates so it's not a surprise when something comes out it's just it's a good story so I kind of wish more would come out sooner but I feel that way about pretty much every story I like so
I know it’s too early for this but I trust this author with her stories, I love the scar you gave me and I know this one will also be good I mean awesome I think I have found a new favorite author on this platform and I want to read more of her stories and I hope she gets the recognition she deserves
honestly, at first the story looked promising and even though the grammar mistakes were annoying, I still enjoyed it very much.
Now for the story itself, I discovered how much unrealistic the MC power growth is and here I'm talking about how he amassed power so easily and no one was able to notice. I mean how none of his brothers or even his father noticed how a sudden powerful organization appeared and didn't investigate it at all.
you say that they're good at managing and rulling and yet they didn't do anything to face against MC since they're the antagonists of this story so far and you made it too easy for MC to gather everything at his hands.
you even made his mother a huge bank where he can get money easily at any time and any place.
Second, the development of the world itself. you said that there exist people who can fly with swords and people who can become Devine like existences around here and yet you didn't even show one person who can do that or even how does the supernatural powers exist.
Is it because of Qi? do people cultivate or are they born with it or something?
Also, if such people exist, how didn't the kingdoms use them so that they can wage wars using these people so that they can become the most powerful kingdom.
So far, we only saw Normal people fight and not like those fantasy battles using techniques and Qi
Third, MC new shit personality or should I say new MC(as you killed the previous one)
Honestly, he's the main reason I hated the last few chapters and how he became. Honestly, character development wise, you were doing very good with each character you introduced and even the brothers and sister of MC were good enough for me and even the change of MC from heartless murderer to a good guy would've been awesome to read and would've made us happy but you throw that away like garbage just to create a stupid twist of the return of old personality.
that made me really angry.
finally, the thing I wanna talk about is how you suddenly made the enemy kingdom suddenly enter the province without MC or his organization discovering about it.
you talked a thousand times about how he controlled the province and yet people easily infiltrated without him noticing anything at all.
you also made this event so confusing with how bad your grammar in those chapters is and the bad change of POV that made it worse.
In the end, I would like to say that first, the novel started good and showed great potential and even got me easily hooked and read more chapters but then it got worse and by the time I reached chapter 46, I hated it.
please try your best to improve it
Awesome fanfic of journey to the west.
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Soo... he got killed in an among us tournament so he got drunk and quit the game. You can't make this stuff up.. idk what the authors goal is but it's over 1200 chapters so it doesn't seem to be a joke. Too many weird phrasings to seem like a coincidence though..
Now I feel like i'm being a bit bias here but I truely love the story. Of course I've known this story almost as long as you (Sunk) have. It just leaves a deep feeling of pride seeing it grow and develop as if it were my own. Not only have you refused to abandon it, I can tell it makes you genuinely happy to write each chapter. (maybe besides the extra long ones lol) I'm proud of you, and even though I always am I don't say it enough.