Extremely disappointed in what this has turned into. Chapters became very short, in less than 1 minute I read it completely. An entire chapter being cut into four? Really? Is very sad.
Good to read Great story developmentGood writingWaiting for new chapter.............................Release fast please....................
I would say that is a very new genre.... you know mc reincarnating as a hero where villian is main protagonistTill now , this novel is pretty nice and updating stability is also very good and especially I like how mc doesn't want to be associated with any of heroines ( in a romantic way ) . I really really hope that author won't add harem or any romance here as you know how much difficult it is to find a novel without any romance or harem nowadays .. .. I also like Xin's interaction with system. Nice novel .... keep it up author !!!! Well, I have a question .. author , is English your second language ??
This book is quite nice, as the mc is not too overpowered. There are some minor grammar issues, and the whole storyline feels kinda wacky. For example, the early chapters are about his family and then whoooosh and he just leaves them
hello author ? when you said after chapter 20 he will be evil and it was true and it is so cool and I love it and also please make more because I really love it and some of us loved it too so please make more and don't over work your self and thank you
I think the story is cool and the development is cool, I hope the author keeps updating.......................................................
4/4/4/5/5: 4.4
dude its a Chinese dude, in a white dude's body, in the marvel universe, written by a Chinese dude that is now being translated back into English...
dude
This web novel is amazing. It books you from the start with an introduction that is blood boiling and peeks your interest at the same time. I can give this novel enough praise and the author is dedicated and amiable. The main character is amazing and there is so much space to delve into with him, the supporting characters are all amazing too and I can't hell but wait for more with a lot of high expectations. If you are looking for an MC that is more real than any other than try this novel , it's great.
I have read around 600 chapters and i have to say this noVel is very tiring to read.
Scheme after scheme as if iT Does not end.
The novel is a chess piece from beginning to the end
His countless swords don’t even have any role in the story
Each sword gives him an advantage for Just one chapter each then they are useless
Mc is an underdog through and through and is always schemed upon by others and let me tell you he was schemed agaiNst from scince He was born to to till now.
So yeah if this type of novel is your cup of tea then read at your own peril
While this novel does have its moments where it Shines buT they are very Short and unsatisfYing
Shameless review by the author as is apparently customary.
This is my first work but I've been reading cultivation and fantasy novels on sites like this for 4-5 years now and have long outgrown the usual tropes and such, so this is my attempt to write a new story I myself would find refreshing.
If you have any constructive feedback as you read, please let me know in the chapter comments so I can take it on board and adjust as I see fit.
Thanks, and I hope you all enjoy!
As of this review, 62 chapters have been posted.
Looking at the title and synopsis, my first impression had been, ‘Great, another transmigrated-to-my-past-self type of plot.’ To my surprise, it was in fact NOT a transmigration story, which is rare in the current webnovel trends.
This is a story about a man who had once reached success but later tasted failure after he was betrayed by his business partner(s). But his prior experiences and success did not fail him, as he received a second chance at building his empire again after he inherited a fortune from a past associate who thought he was a suitable heir. He was approached by the associate’s assistant—Fait—who offered an olive branch to him just when he thought he was done. Now, her entrance into this story was one that made me misunderstand the genre of the story—the way she was introduced made it seem as if she was some sort of mysterious deity who was there to pass the man to his next life. And while it did not involve magic or reincarnation or anything mystical, she did indeed granted him a second chance by giving him a new position, a new company, and a new home.
Although there is an impending threat to his life floating in the background, there is very little feeling of suspense, and perhaps the rather laidback and calm personality of the protagonist might attribute to that. The image he had presented in the earlier chapters were considerably different than the person he had showed himself to be in the later chapters to the point that he could very well be another person. That being said, stress could change people, and realistically, it is not strange for someone who had—or is currently trying to—overcome failure to change their personality to a certain extent.
Despite the unexplainable feeling of unease I feel over the protagonist who seem to have a mysterious past yet to be discovered, the disparity in his reactions compared to other people’s expectations are amusing. They often lead to hilarity and/or a sense of satisfaction, and I quite like it when he proves his capabilities to others (a.k.a face-slapping) especially since he does it in a way so natural that unless you were the receiving party you wouldn’t have realised he’s been slapping faces. Conversely, the author should be careful in developing his character, as it would be so easy to turn him into a Gary Stu who just bulldozes his way to the top with his amazing (plot) capabilities (armour).
The story reads smoothly, and the straightforward style of writing made it easy to follow the story even when the perspectives change. For once, I am glad that I found a story written well enough that I don’t have to break my head trying to decipher the texts. While there are mistakes here and there, they aren’t really noticeable or too bothersome that it would break one’s concentration over the story. Kudos to the author for that. I would suggest the author to get an editor to weed out the little errors since there’s only so much you can fix with self-editing.
My only complain is that while the story isn’t boring, it’s pretty anticlimactic as it feels as if there’s nothing going on yet a lot is going on. It feels more of a slice-of-life story, if anything, and if that was the author’s goal, then lucky for you it has been achieved.
...Just me?
...Maybe I wasn’t paying attention well enough when I was reading. Oof.
All in all, it was a good read. Good work, author.
I would like to greatly appreciate everyone for waiting patiently for the updates. I am uploading one chapter daily. Thank you for reading my craft!