ARE THEY NOT TRANSLATING THIS ?
ARE THEY NOT TRANSLATING THIS ?
ARE THEY NOT TRANSLATING THIS ?
ARE THEY NOT TRANSLATING THIS ?
ARE THEY NOT TRANSLATING THIS ?
ARE THEY NOT TRANSLATING THIS ?
ARE THEY NOT TRANSLATING THIS ?
ARE THEY NOT TRANSLATING THIS ?
ARE THEY NOT TRANSLATING THIS ?
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This book story is good
The start is unique compared to others book
But even if the world is of fantasy how can the MC start talking and playing before 1yrs old u r growing him too fast
You should have time skip
But book is good waiting for more update
Really great short light read. Fast paced. The characters are very likeable. I just need more of them. Them FLS team needs some side stories!!!
A wonderful tale of a bastard in charge of a guild of cut throat mercenaries, any one of which in polite society would be strung up and beaten with a stick. From comical misha** of a cowardly warrior forcefully conscripted to a plushie loving one eyed berserker woman, from a towering crude titanblood to a happy go lucky eldritch horror associating warlock, from a wonderfully lewd demonic woman to a horse wanted for murder. There's no end to original characters who are funnier, crazier and down right entertaining from their first introductions to their exits stage right.
Read this book if you want anti heroes, scheming bastards, an MC who is a male medusa and an author who brings all these inglorious bastards to life with seeming ease and no end of flare!
This one of the best sci-fi I have read. Valmon Dain wowed me with his calm and coordinated approach to detecting crimes without putting emotions in it. I never get tired of reading and rereading.
Hi guys! Here is the author giving a shameless review... a cliché introduction, why not?
Ok, I'm going to give a little introduction to the novel. Like the tags says, this is going to be a Harem novel. But not like the ones that the girls follow the boy without any sense. They all have their personality, probably some of them could be cliché, but what type of character isn't a cliche nowadays?
There are going to be girls that don't fall out for the mc and fall for other men characters. There are going to be boys who are friends of the Mc that are going to have importance in the novel.
The novel has an Mc, but it will also follow the progress of other characters. There aren't incomprehensible power-ups...
I'm not going to write any filler chapters; I don't like them. If I write, it's is going to be with a reason like the development of feelings between characters, some random information that I need to introduce, etc...
Just take a look! I hope you enjoy my novel! I'm open to suggestions in the reviews!
The characters lack depth.
Especially the wife. I would have forgotten her if she wasn’t mentioned once in a while.
The protagonist doesn’t seem to think before acting, making me wonder why he did this or that. An exemple is having the USA agents killed. It doesn’t help anyone. Also, he doesn’t seem bothered after being directly responsible for the murder of hundreds of people.
The technology he is offered is way ahead of what Earth is capable, and he should have to spend a serious amount of time and ressources developing the intermediate steps. He reach those steps too easily (if he didn’t bypass them). The author should check technology trees in games such as the one who share its name with the title of this work, and remember that theory and practice/application are differents.
Also, the system rewards are much to great for the tech development he completed.
World background is lacking. Little to no description of the characters, surroundings, buildings and inventions.
Interesting, but the execution need some work.
I enjoyed reading this one and I'll put it to my collections. Just like they said, the narration is good and you deserve 5 stars.
The characters are well defined and the world building is good.
The first 5 chapters is a huge info dump, but none of it is info you need nor wanted. On the parts where you need info there is not any. I recommend reading over what you wrote becuase there are a lot grammer and spelling mistakes. You should also consider writing from a point of view that it is happening to you Instead of saying then Whoever told us this. Use more quotes instead of saying someone said do this. There are many plot holes as well so consider filling those in. There are so many things wrong with the quality of writing that I assume you know of. The power system is not very good either. The story itself and the idea behind It is good, but the story is very poorly written. I do not know the update schedule so i just put four for it. The quality of the book drops immensely the more I read. If you can rewrite the Chapters and improve your grammer I believe this could be a great book, but it is not for now.
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