Faier
My review is a reflection of the rest. This is the highest number of 1 star reviews I have ever seen on webnovel .
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I recommend everyone to read this novel, it has something new which is missing in other system based novelS anD i will not spoil that thinNg. check it out For yourself and keep it Up author
5 stars from me⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I'll be honest, I had to read this novel multiple times to really get the gist of everything.
I'll start off by saying that the writing there was very good, there's emotion, imagery and the scenes as well as interactions between characters are shown nicely. No info dumps whatsoever, thus making the reading experience engaging.
Now, while I do understand that the author stated that this is a slow burn novel, I was quite lost as the first few chapters. There were things going on, they were being told to me, but I'm still trying to figure what does Deus really want in the end, because his goals seem extremely vague for me at the moment.
The remaining chapters up until the recent chapter felt much more clear in terms of direction. Also, why are there two tags to this story? modern and medieval? I'll be honest, I had to read this novel multiple times to really get the gist of everything.
I'll start off by saying that the writing there was very good, there's emotion, imagery and the scenes as well as interactions between characters are shown nicely. No info dumps whatsoever, thus making the reading experience engaging.
Now, while I do understand that the author stated that this is a slow burn novel, I was quite lost as the first few chapters. There were things going on, they were being told to me, but I'm still trying to figure what does Deus really want in the end, because his goals seem extremely vague for me at the moment.
The remaining chapters up until the recent chapter felt much more clear in terms of direction. Also, why are there two tags to this story? modern and medieval? I'll be honest, I had to read this novel multiple times to really get the gist of everything.
I'll start off by saying that the writing there was very good, there's emotion, imagery and the scenes as well as interactions between characters are shown nicely. No info dumps whatsoever, thus making the reading experience engaging.
Now, while I do understand that the author stated that this is a slow burn novel, I was quite lost as the first few chapters. There were things going on, they were being told to me, but I'm still trying to figure what does Deus really want in the end, because his goals seem extremely vague for me at the moment.
The remaining chapters up until the recent chapter felt much more clear in terms of direction. Also, why are there two tags to this story? modern and medieval? because I barely see any detail containing any one of the tags, and more information would be nice. Also, I haven't really seen the sci fi aspects stand out.
In short, the writing itself is good, but I believe the world building and story direction can be better.
honestly I was surprised. I started this randomly, and the beginning of the story felt very generic and bland. However, soon after, the pace started picking up, the plot thickened and the story became intriguing. The characters get interesting with depth and mostly the story stopped being predictable!!
it's a pretty good novel that's underrated
and it keeps getting better and better.
I really like the idea of this book and hope it does well
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i cant help but get wet reading this novel, everything in this novel is like a sun burning mother earth to dust along with humanity this is just soo goooood and I need moarr like, the chapters are too short i need 5k+ of this novel
This one is rough, the grammar issues are bad enough to ruin the story. I find it hard to even follow the story developement when I'm trying to figure out what the author is even trying to say.
I love the stories background and the world building potential that leaves the main character open to go in many different ways along with facing interesting challenges leaves me very satisfied.
Very interesting. Please, when is the next episode coming out? I can't wait . I mean Henry you are too much. Please send the next episode please..
