This is translation review, not novel review.
If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator.
With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity.
And with the worst case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel).
overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
Yet another choice system. I see these in trial reads all the time but none of them make it through. They all seem so interesting too.
I have not read much yet so take this at face Value. I enjoy the few characters and their personalities that we have been introduced to so far. I also enjoy the plot, although it is not very unique i like where it is going. the only problem i have is that the writing can sound kind of weird like some things been written in present tense when it should have been written in past tense, but it does not bother me much. over all i recommend it
WQ: (5/5). US: (5/5). SD: (5/5). CD: (4/5). WB: (5/5).
30 chapters in and can say with confidence that Im defintley going beyond those paid chapters.
Concept is done in an intriguing way.
So far, the MC holds the story together for me. I like the lone wolf/morally grey types of characters. They can repetitive but when written right, theyre pretty kino.
Ive been looking around the site for a while for a good story to read since I joined, and Im glad this is the first one to stick with me. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The writing does a good job of setting the atmosphere and tension but is let down by grammar.
Pacing is pretty good, the story moves along well. Each individual chapter also doesn't feel too long.
Not a terrible concept, but your grammar leaves much to be desired. Consider taking a few days off to edit your entire story. Also consider creating a table of contents and/or an addendum of power levels.
i just started reading but the story seems intersting, just that the grammar is too bad. i would suggest using grammarly. even the free version would help. I hope you will get an editor. if you can't find one (which is really easy to find) i could also offer to be an editor for the novel.
After reading some other reviews and the author's own words I forced myself to read to chapter 21 before dropping it. The writing/grammar is kinda meh, but the storytelling is pretty good, the first person style of writing is really not my cup of anything and I just find it annoying. The characters are kinda meh so far. The male lead is your typical perverted shounen harem lead. As for how he will find a lifetime love while he is constantly thinking of boning every girl he meets, I have no clue, either way I feel bad for her already.
Tactics and strategies of epic proportions. A good novel to follow for people who like kingdom building and thought-evoking philosophies.
Legend says that Aero's fate lies in the hands of Keikokumars as he is more proficient at scheming and plotting... *ugh storybuilding.
Please find an editor to improve the quality of the story. There are grammar mistakes and run-on sentences among others. Just find yourself a good strategist... *cough editor.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you
Stereotypical opening MC is reborn and wants revenge for the original body. Just once, I would like for an MC to say screw that. Anywho ignoring my tangent the plot moves quick enough, but nothing new.
A promising novel hopefully it isn't dropped as I'm starting to really enjoy it and most other non human or gender bender novels I'm reading have been dropped or have started to upload less and less.