Odwil is a very forgiving
This is better than 90% of the stuff you read on here Not the best but it’s a high level of good
More please I don't want to drop my phone. This book is so amazing, fascinating and the story line is on a whole new level. I love it. Please more chapters we are anticipating
I really like this novel i like how right when he gets transported to mha world he not only becomes pain but thinks and acts like him and adds some of his ideologies in the novel.Good work i really am excited for every new chapter hopefully you can do a mass release one Day
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I love eveutnkng about the book... keep up the good work... I like the fact that Henry is not at all pertirbed and it is good to have a hero who doesn’t get beaten often.. He is ideal
The tags say that the story is yuri, but as far as I have read the protagonist is a man, has anyone read the story? They know what gender it belongs to if it is yuri or not.
Due to the recent toxic comment(s) from a handful of readers (or an alt from a hater), it has come to me that some readers might have misunderstood the concept of this novel.
Therefore, I'm putting this review as a disclaimer, so these readers who are expecting a certain type of MC or a type of story can understand what they are getting into. And then, when they start flaming, I can just remind them of their ignorance.
What you will NOT see in this novel.
1. Fast-paced story
2. OP MC at the beginning of the story
3. Unyielding MC that refuses to bow down to anyone.
4. An evil MC that violates laws and order at the early story.
5. A Mary Sue, Gary Stu, Kirito-like MC that infinitely gains instant powerup without having to work hard.
6. An alpha MC that has a perfect personality and makes perfect decisions in every action.
7. A ruthless, reckless, and brainless MC that goes around and provoke everyone left and right because of a trivial matter.
8. Humorless dark story.
What you will SEE in this novel.
1. Slow-paced story.
2. An MC that understands these words and can put them into practice; "Compromise", "Tactical Retreat", "Surrender", "Mutual Interest and Benefit", and "Politics"
3. MC with a brain, but it fails to function properly sometimes, especially when his dick takes over.
4. MC NTRing other protagonists.
5. Plot twists.
6. Hard-working but mental MC
7. A semi-useless system, but it forces MC to work hard.
8. Toned down mature scenes.
9. Memes and Jojo References
10. THOTS, Mind-Breaking, Mind-Controlling, HAREMS.
11. Weak-to-Strong MC
12. Moderately Stupid-to-Military Genius MC
13. VILLAIN =/= EVIL
14. Protagonist =/= GOOD
I hope this would clarify the tone of this story. I'll edit this when there are changes.
In summary, to those readers that motherf-ckingly claimed that they are here looking for an evil mc and got disappointed when they found a mature MC with a politic face, they can just F off.
Now, I've warned you. You can roast me with your almighty insights, my dear trolls. I welcome all constructive criticisms that points out my mistakes, flaws, inconsistency, and advice on what I can do better. But personal attacks, toxic comments, and flaming will be instantly deleted.
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i recommending reading it, its quite good
mc is not lazy and hardworking and he is doing his best
though i wish in the future that the mc will make the biggest investment company there is
This is a very good story, especially for this site. Have you posted it on fanfiction? I would recommend to do so. This story will be a hit there. Hope you continue it
Don't be fooled by the high rating, it's because the author can review his own novel and give it 5 stars any number of times.
The novel is just another crappy fanfic, with the MC basically jerking off to FY, and not doing anything interesting. The grammar is tolerable, which isn't saying a lot. The author's exposition is telling us what we already know, instead of adding anything new to the table. And the author's take on FY is awful.
TLDR: Don't read it if you're expecting a decent fanfiction.