pangyboi
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Games unite! No seriously, I know how frustrating it is to lose a game when you're on a winning record. Al, our protagonist, took to dark web to rectify his record but ended up in a bigger mess. Those of you looking for some sci-fi action, do check this out. ISTG you won't be disappointed.
I really want to see this. it's unique and seems like has a huge potential .
Meh. Too boring, naive and insipid to continue reading. The hero and his life are poorly revealed, sometimes not realistic. From the beginning of the beta-test a line of cheats begins and- No, this is too stereotyped to continue reading.
Well to be honest first chapters were annoying to read as understanding became bit difficult till the chapters I read story pacing is bit slow not like everyday cliche has bit realism to it. I liked the fact of t/n notes sometimes funny though sometimes annoying?. At least author is considerate of readers explaining Somefacts. Well keep it up man hope to see this novel getting updated. Well for other readers atleast try it see if it's your cup of tea though it's Definitely mine. Well iam not good at writing reviews. Well I will try to edit it after reading
What else should i say? I only last for a couple of chapters. Some of the scenes were mismatch. I just want to read it'll save me from thinking too much but now im thinking too much ughh author sama should edit this book again. OP but not quite that OP as it says. Rain hate on me but you can't blame my dislike for this book. Edit some scenes that confuses people and this might pass as good.
I quite enjoy this story, although quite generic like any other novel, it has it's interesting aspects. The only problem I have with this novel is the slow updates and translation. I'm sure the translators are working hard on this novel but my only suggestion is to improve translation quality. Other than that Martial god space is quite a fun read especially for beginners.
This is a good story, waiting for your next updates ?
The major flaw in this type of work is the same: social isolation. Humans were made to grow in society, a forum is not a substitute for that. Do you want to make this story interesting? Make the MC start to wonder if the forum really is real people, nothing: - I have a system to be jealous of. Make MC want to use the system trying to escape. The essence of this story should be a prison break, not instagram competition.
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_ , this a good progressing novel
Just now started to read... Starting in a slow pace hope will increase the interest level. The lead characters are nicely introduced. Waiting to read more
