keep posting your chapter like this story
Just reading this synopsis made it thrilling and exciting. What more if I read the first chapter? Hihihi, i have high expectations Author..Pls update daily...Make it more entertaining..????
Theres only been a few chapters so far so this is an early review but...Writing Quality: This one was unexpectedly good. The author has a good comman of english and I haven’t spotted any typos or grammatical errors. The sentence structure is well paced and varies from line to line to keep things flowing.Story and character development: The main character has a depth to him, and the plot itself feels realistic and raw. The characters are multifaceted and not just boring stock characters. I really felt the emotion during the appearance of the second creature. (Intentionally Vague to avoid spoilers)World background: Too early tp say much, but what has been revealed so far has been done through more show rather than tell. I love that.Overall, this book has the potential to become a gem. Author, please don’t drop this novel :)
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Sigh. I don't think this is even proper (leaving a review for myself). But oh well. I guess i need this to attract more readers! My "novel" is quite serious. Maybe it's not for everyone. If you want some light-hearted stuff, read my other novel. (CMW) I will post daily for both. :)
..................................................One of the best story I've ever read so far. I really love it. mysterious as ever. keepkeepit up Author!
Although as the Author I should be really biased and give it a 5, but I honestly don’t believe it deserves it. However, this is my first work and I want this to be a 5 and will work my hardest to make sure that by the end I can say that it deserves that a 5. I hope you’ll give it a read regardless and support me as I try and improve.
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Zombies , monsters and mutants ....... Such a chaotic world . Not bad actually ,the main lead is quite strong for starters ,I like it . The story progress is not too slow nor too fast ,it's only that the chapters update is unusual with no systematic pattern ( at least I feel like it ) .
This story is not how it seems, never believe that you know what’s going to happen next because there is an almost assured chance that your going to be smacked with a new surprise at least once or even multiple times a chapter, this doesn’t mean the story is hard to understand if you pay attention though, keep an open mind about anything and everything that happens and expect the unexpected, this story is the funnest read for those who like plot twists
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It would have been one of the good ones out there, but the writing quality is pretty much on a machine-translation level or even worse.You'd really have to keep your brain running in full capacity in order to make sense of some paragraphs, which makes this book headache-inducing.