Tianfei was silent. She stood up unsure of how to react. Her hands were still shivering. Her spirit seemed shattered.
"Unfortunately the right person to lead are people to prosperity has yet to appear for King Vegeta is far to self-centered, even for a Saiyan and has for far too long sat on the Saiyan throne, growing fouler with every day that passes while scheming like a petty miser to protect what little power he possess."
"Oh, come on! My daughter isn't one of those girls who is kind to everyone, and ends up breaking countless hearts! She's only ever kind to you! It's as obvious as the pale butt of an infant in broad daylight!"
"Yes, you'll need it if you are going to last any longer." The man in blue talked in an aloof fashion like he already knew everything about everything.
As he was about to open his car door.
"Fuck," Reitz gasped in shock.
"Ms. Lin," I heard him call me.
A solid read, but incredibly annoying. Word padding is just purposely insulting at this point.This novel did almost everything right when it comes to it's premise.An immortal doing cultivation just not to be killed or die due to stupid reasons. MC has a whole concept and philosophy of life based on that. Anyway, characters are done nicely, MC is beyond perfect for what the premise says (he's the definition of caution), the world building is a continuous process. The development and where the story is going is interesting.I can say almost everything is as it should be.HOWEVER, THE WORD PADDING!!! I don't know how this novel even was approved and published and translated to English. The word padding and repeating is so annoying. Pick any random chapter, and you'll see the same idea repeated a dozen times. Author says progress of the novel is slow and developments take their time, but it's actually just a lot of useless unnecessary expanding and repeating the same exact thing a million times. If you ignore all the word padding and repeats, then the development is actually decent and even fast. The word padding made it just awful. I haven't read something that does worse word padding than this in a long time.
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Kinda different, good to see a new ranking system, names are interesting too.I don't quite understand everything yet but I like the way the story moves from a place to another instead of POV.Interesting story, any updates?
I Love the Characters and their relationship.
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