Good writing quality, but there are a few grammar mistakes, the story is good I like it, just hope he won't get arrogant and wonder what happens if he gets his draconic bloodline too. I like the character so far, just hope he will be more vampire less human in the future, 6 chapters a weeks is good.
Lots of ppl say that this story is blsht cause author wrights about music. I can't agree with this statement because you don't say author wrights blsht when he talks about qi? wtf is that mental cultivation shait? can you do it? cause i can't. Still i oretty much enjoy reading "Sorceres journey
A few chapters of this book and I love it so much keep up the good work, I don't really like "system" before but book has made me to.Yours faithfully kaiga_providence.
Now I'm not normally one to write reviews but I really enjoyed the start of this story and then it lost me around chpt 160. FYI spoilers included.The story starts great and I like how it explores the idea of runes and how they can be used, then showing the advantage the system gives him as it seems specific to that use. However all of a sudden it seems like the author says f*** it and changes the story completely. Now don't get me wrong I don't dislike beast tamer stories and I can see how it would work in the world the author has built, but it's such a sudden shift and with how important the author makes Divine Beast Masters out to be, how can there be no mention whatsoever in the story until the MC decides to be one. Then on top of that the system changes completely and don't get me started on there being next to no focus on runes and the personal development we started with. To top it off we go from a medieval type world with carriages and horses to magical guns and vans and talk of the MC being so OP with his divine beast you "can't even see his tail lights" he is so good. If the story focused on one of these aspects then I can say without a doubt it would have me hooked but over all I just found it a bit confusing.
This is not yours, I can see your thievery and smell your BS. You did not write this, instead stole this from another person, and made it your own. Do you know what that is called? That is called being a thief and plagiarizing on other authors work. This is not yours so stop posting stolen work as your own
the story is so good, i kept on reading it. From the characters, the plot, the wordings, everything is just so in sync. i hope that the author keep on writing good stories. thank you for this story.
us This original If not can you give me The sauce?
waiting for new chaps and the story was very good we will like you to continue ❤️❤️❤️❤️?????❤️???❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️????
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A premissa e incrivel, o desenvolvimento e viciante, so falta a estabilidade das postagem de capitulos. ??????????????????????????????????????????????????
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I don't really write reviews very often but i have write one cuz I don't know how this novel doesn't have millions of views already cuz compared to trash ?️ novels which have millions of views this is really good. Read it.