Very funny. Clueless guy causing Chaos, in a good Way. Really don’t want t give anything else away. It is very well written and flows nicely.
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Rating this to remind myself that I didn't like it when looking for new stuff to read. The most glaring issue is the grammar, but the main character is what killed it for me.
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4 stars for translation quality. 1 star for everything else. It’s a half assed power fantasy by an author who most likely has never played a MMORPG. One major example is a forest full of crows for like parties of lvl 20-30 players. Which fights in swarms of a dozen or more. Author made MC op and says due to him being a god, if he attacks a crow, the other crows won’t react at all. So MC’s 1v1ing a crow, and somehow struggling (even when MC’s stats are multiple times that of similar lvl players), then wins in the end. Author starts bragging about the stats of a single crow. This is a forest, full of crows, who swarm you and attack in groups of 12 or more. Any other player would be one shot.It might as well be a single player game instead of a VRMMORPG given how all mobs are suddenly magically 10x stronger than players of the same lvl just so they can put up a fight against our very op heavily plot armored MC.
The MC is already mature. so I don't really get the struggle of MC. But, the MC have unique character so it's interesting to follow.I cannot see the long term goals of MC other than pursue the past love that he lose.And again I just about 40 chapters.So not really get overalls stroy.
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One of the best Xianxia ever written. In other xianxia/xuanhuan novels, you will always find MC's luck ridiculous and never meet a setback. But here you will see how hard Wang Lin's efforts in the cultivation world and how he struggles.Some people say mc is too vicious, heartless, etc. it's because author tried to make a very complex character. And he actually changes, yes he CHANGES. I won't tell you how he changes, But I promise you it will be very touching.And this is not you typical xianxia where mc go here--->offend this young master--->kill--->get women--->repeat10/10 for the character development
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It's super cliche like almost all other books, but the delivery is well done. The protagonist's cultivation does it explode to ridiculous levels (He is still too powerful for his level) instead he focuses on random stuff.
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