TheDeathmail
It’s meh at best. Author used some very powerful writing in the first chapter. After that turns into a very stereotypical boring Japanese style protagonist. Very much told not shown the story. And it’s really hard to feel invested in the plot, world or characters after the first chapter.The premise behind the novel is great, and I would have absolutely adored this novel had it been more human, raw, personal or portrayed any emotion at all. It’s like this the reason people love goblin slayer but detest all of those 3 star rinse and repeat anime out there. No one wants to read about a super benevolent always happy perfect protag in a super innocent happy world. It’s just too hard to relate or connect to those characters.Anyway author well done on the concept though. Really powerful concept and you really nailed the first chapter making the MC a real person. After that he stopped being a human
good till chapter 6 hoping for more.....
Good start has potential will look forward to what happens
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Trash novel that’s written as the MC is a speaking to the reader and the MC is a retard. Its basically unreadable. Don’t know how it got to 400+ chapters.
This is not an original work by arzone. the original author is Daisuke Aizawa please mass report this. its one thing to translate without permission its another to actually act like you're the authorhttps://***.amazon.com/Eminence-Shadow-Vol-light-novel/dp/1975359054
this is a nice book for me and I hope for more chaptersAnd also try give us clear stages for your book's cultivation systemI hope it's selectednice work so farthanks.
I loved it. Please continue updating the story author. Please don't drop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really want to see the relationship between Rai and Tian develop.
this novel is the best author i really like this and it has all the elements I like (eg:World travelling, cultivation, harem ,system etc) idk why it is underrated but I just want to say that to the author Thank you for this wonderful novel and please don't drop me this ??
imma be honest I'm lost I'm trying to understand the first chapters are confusing I'm trying to understand it I've reread it 5 times but I just get from it hes a powerful guy with a mysterious background in this life
Only have 4 stars for updating because it was before but I don’t want to make it lower and hurt this great story
this is really an amateur/nonsense novel. i think author is just trying to pass time poorly. mc has a cultivation manual from his master but he don't know any cultivation levels or any other cultivator/body forger and ask others what does a ranked one mean. he knows that he encounters demons and didn't want to report of officials lest they think he is talkin nonsense when these officials are actually clearing these demons secretly and know more about demon than him and mc can still get some clues what officials were doing like what happn in town. also mc say he live in low martial world but except for him there is no other person in town seen in early novel who even uses knife or weapon for hunting/training he just sells forged daily use items and when other ask why no weapons he says no one use them in town. no introduction to cultivation levels and no idea whats going on in mc current living world in early chapters it's like in authors mind he think readers already know. and when mc gets blood bead he uses it without any vigilance clearly showing stupidity even when he saw others trying evil method on town people with these beads let's not talk about the woman who was next door when he world traveled for first time.
