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very good, i'm really enjoying the characters, i think there will be a lot to explain in the future, both about the MC's friends and the other guild members, keep up the great work
The book so far has been pretty good
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I love this novel. At the beginning and throughout the story there are some terms that are foreign to me(to be expected when reading something with a foreign setting) but everything or at least most everything is explained after a little bit. Li Yun was an interesting character, I loved his development into the different career fields he explored and the development of him as a character as he goes from being a child into a young man that is in a romantic relationship with someone from a powerful background. I also love the way the romance was developed. It was subtle at times but then bam there was a chapter or nearly a chapter dedicated to the developing romance and it allowed for enough satisfaction brought from the sweet moments between Li Yun and his partner while also allowing the story to continue developing in the background. Most importantly though, I love the way the typical corruption was implemented and how it was resolved. Overall I loved this book, it sucked that the ending was so abrupt and left so many questions but it also leaves the reader with something to think about which I think is a great way of leaving a lasting impression on the reader. I heavily recommend reading this and hope anyone that does makes sure they persist to the end and enjoy reading!
Thank you author for writing something so enjoyable to read I don't know if you are still active on this app but I just wanted to say thanks!
Note: This story has no harem(I don't think this is a spoiler so I'm not going to label the review as such)
Alright this is my first detailed review ever.
This review is until CHAPTER 39.
First of all i am regular reader of this book and have been starting this from the beginning.
Writing Quality- The writing quality is great, there are some grammatical mistakes but the author regularly corrects them. The fluidity of the dialogues and scenes flows really well. The vocabulary is also quite fitting.
Character Design- The characters are hella unqiue and quirky, everyone has their own desires and appear to be full of life. Author also includes slice of life moments to make them appear more alive.
Updates stabilty- Not the best tbh although in the last week it has been 1ch/day.
World Background- Probably one of the best ever. It is extremely well fleshed out and has many layers to it. At the same time there are no info dumps we slowly get all the relevant info.
Even a simple city get's enough development.
Plot- Very strong and mysterious. It does not fall into the trap of cockroach and predictable villains. The characters have selfish motivations so dont expect saving the world nonsense.
Protagonist- The protagonist is like no other but if i have to describe him in simple terms think of like an immortal senior reincarnated as a mortal. A regular old immortal i mean.
All in all this is one of my top 5 stories on this platform.
Author sama dont you dare drop this beauty.
well, although the writing quality is a bit low but still it's much better than reading those novels on trail read where everything is like 100x bonus, 10000x bonus, being fully OP from the very start.
A nice read for me, just keep updating regularly
Good writing quality. Frequent updates, pretty much daily. Story development, checked! Character Design, seems good so far. World Background, too early to judge.
Keep up the good work.
Okay!! From where do I start?
First of all, thank you author for such an amazing book.
A boy who loathes the vampire race ends up in a vampire's body and that too one of the strongest vampires. Hmm, interesting!! Now that Atlas has become a vampire, it is his turn to show who is in power. Come on, bring in the revenge.
The writing quality is great and the story proceeds smoothly, although at times it does become a little confusing. But that's fine. And certainly, one of the many things the author is great at updating regularly.
The story is filled with action, emotions and of course, mystery. The story is intriguing and although there are 20 odd chapters currently, it is enough to keep the readers hooked and curious to find out what happens next. Some of the scenes are so vividly described that it is easy to visualize them.
Now, all that remains to see is how the story proceeds and what kind of character Atlas will turn into.
Kudos to the author for such an awesome story and all the best!!!!
this story is a Total gold.. character design is great and everything is just amazing for me... keep it up author
The story progression is very good and I have enjoyed every bit of it. There are not many thing going on at the same time making it easy to understand.
I was really surprised on how soo many different concepts and ideas were used in this story. There's aliens, time travel, revenge, super powers in this story and even with soo much on the plate it feels it's been executed well. Yes, there are moments were it feels too fast or too much, but with such complexity in the story I would have been surprised if there weren't any such moments. But I do feel things can get a little slow for good at some parts. But with that aside, I feel the world building is really done greatly! It is really well written and it keeps me intrigued to read more! Keep up the good work author!