By steadying putting one sloth claw in front of another sloth claw, this motivated author has successfully inserted his readers into a real time and place that for most readers will be both a complete unknown and a bastion for fervent imagination and creative plot developments ... ... I absolutely love this genre of a novel, BUT it is sooooo so hard to find quality among the few field entrants... but this looks quite promising. This is not the quality of "A Step into the Past," "Tales of Reincarnated Lord," "Great Tang Idyll," or the first half of "Picking up a General.." BUT, it appears to have the potential to be just beneath them... and very probably can stand at the top of "historical w_a system" sub genre... ... I am EXCITED to read more of the interwoven facts about medieval Poland and ANXIOUS to see what developmental paths this MC takes... ... ... so let's pool our resources and get motivatedsloth a small shipment of methamphetamines because him writing non-stop for 2 weeks w/o sleep is most definitely in everyone's best interest. ... ... jokes aside, this is GOOD... I want MORE... no complaints if the chapters were 2-3 times as long with more dialogue, descriptors, etc. :-p
Really good hentai/18+ novel, the interactions with both his mother and sister, plus his way of thinking would even have s*x with his mother who was quiet nice.
Although I hope he doesn't just stick to them only and expandes his empire.
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This novel is quite decent. Besides the most overpower MC starter package I have ever seen, Everything else about the novel is quite good.
The MC is very hardworking and reasonable. He does not spend his time doing unrelated **** and always actively find a way to improve.
The background characters are quite reasonable. Not everyone wanted to kill him and not everyone he fights with bear a grudge and people respected him when he strong.
If you want a decent novel with very little bad cliques, hardworking MC, decent plots, and fast-paced action, this novel is for you.
The first 70 chapters are Soo good. But then there comes the love part and it all goes stoinks. A simple date takes about 4 chapters. Buying clothes = chapter. It just became a slice of life now . His power level is stuck. No level ups, or anything. Pure school thingy, btw the school ark is useless because he didn't learn anything, well besides kissing a lady. Please author, don't forget his power leveling. Its slowly becoming a trash. Any experienced adventurer should focus on leveling up bec he's near death a lot of times because he's weak. But there he is, focusing on girls. Damn. I'm reaaallyy gettin bored.
So I loved this, it made want to travel too. I can imagine the amount of research that went into writing this, and the attention to small details makes it an even better read.
If you enjoy reading about different places and cultures I would definitely recommend this.
END IS HERE...oh I like that... author improved his grammar compared to his previous novel...and grammar mistakes are little to none. Nice starting, so far good. It's a type of novel which action mixed with lite gore(I am not of fan of it though). So far story is normal and no plottwists or something make it say wow. but it's nice novel. World background is same as modern so there's nothing to say but author writing about surroundings is good. Character development is nice and like that MC don't become douche bag after apocalypse started like mc in god and devil world. Hope that he won't become douchebag. Nice work author.
I will give five for the idea.I will give two for MC being trash and heavily bullied by his family as it seems that for most of the novels it became a popular template.( And I always want to ask is there really a need to always have MC's like this.)I give one for always having the scene in almost all novels where the MC will always go to take a bath and conveniently the lake has a women who is stronger than MC(It eludes me how the girl thinks no one will come and not make take any extra measures) and somehow the first thing the girl tries to do is kill him and somehow MC manages to convince the girl to spare him and that he will owe her.( Nothing wrong with the scene, but is it necessary to have this scene in almost all novels)-( This is the point that made me who was reading the novel with interest to write the review and not continue reading this novel.)
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Looking good for now. But the author has the bad habit of FORCING HAREM.He did the same for A Valiant Life (Suddenly harem out of nowhere after a timeskip), and The Storngest System (A VERY forced harem, like really really really forced just for comedic purposes which completely ruined the story for me).So I am afraid to read this. The authors novels goes mostly like this, Not harem until the last 50 chapters with there being only one girl.Then at the last few chapters suddenly the mc fucks it and fucks other chicks.GG EZ.
This novel had everything that I wanted In a novel (except him being not op). The problem is there are paragraphs that you need to read twice or thrice to understand. I like how realist he is (though it's a fantasy setting). Hope this gwt picked up cuz the only time there is a novel quite similar to this (I'm a baller), it got much many more vote yet it wad not chosen, and when they're bringing back those not chosen but popular ones, it's not one of them. Pls. webnovel, just give us this...
my review for this novel(im not a hater, contains mild spoiler, I've read till chp 16)caution: read this novel if you doesn't care for faulty power/combat/levelling system and quite brain dead mcthe story starts with how apparently weak the mc was. due to reason i'll not say, he arrived last at the school when they are giving free skills for first timer, making mc only get the last skill left that is self healing. nothing is wrong right? it was said that people can train to get attribute points and skills. with self healing, the amount of time mc could train the body is many times longer and receive benefit faster than other people, yet he never does this. mc is actually quite a clever kid, he managed to create an arrow almost as good as a b rank wood arrow by using a c rank wood (cost much lesser than b rank wood) + slime urine which is practically free. he also manage fool the guard by selling the c rank arrow at the price of higher than a b rank arrow. oh so you readers may wonder why do i said the mc is brain dead and the system in this novel is busted right?now here is the problem, the first chapter is showing how mc, a lv0 human fights a lv1 frog monster. you would see nothing is wrong here right? casual fighting monster 1 lv higher than you right? well, all is well until you see mc damages is only 1dmg when the frog deals like 30 dmg from normal attacks. the reasoning why his dmg is so low from the novels is that mc have no attacking skills (mc have benn whining how he have no attacking skill for all those 16 chp). but wait, you would think that stats influence the effect of normal attacks and skills. if an attack skill let you increase damage by 10%, with mc damage(that is 1 dmg), he could only dish out 1,1 damage which is way worse than his self healing which can heal his health for quite a good chunk. so the way i see it, he gaining self healing is way better than having attack skills. but than i notice something, you use magic skill by draining stamina? like wtf!! in the novel mc doesn't even have mana. if so, how the f other people gain mana then? its not like there is no poor people other then mc right? is gaining a magic skill unlocks mana? that can't be because he already have magic skills. why don't mc change his skill to a physical one then? he could always barter with other people for an attacking skill outside the school.honestly, the author is making level gap a big of a chasm. a lv1 monster can deal lots of damage against a lv 0 human is honestly mind boggling. its not like a monster gain 3-5x the amount of stats human gain when leveling up. if his damage is already so low, wouldn't it be better for mc to just chuck rocks from a safe distances using hands or slingshot, at least it reduces his chances of receiving dmg. besides how the hell mc as clever as he was never tried to team up with anyone else? even if he have low dps, he could be a tanker because his self healing. if his class is his enemies, he could go to other class to team up right? its not like everyone is an evil bullying bastards. he could also report to the teacher that he was close to for all his bullying which he never do. you could argue that mc is a loner/introvert but even i as a loner/introvert could report and ask help from others. he also have a very sick sister, which he very desperate to cure. so there is no excuse at all for him not to team up with others. his attitude for not seeking any help in all that condition is honestly just sheer arrogance and brain dead in my eyes.