nice story, good luck
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In the sea of mediocrity, copy/paste stories and ****ty writing, this novel sticks out. At least for first 60 chapters. It has potential to be amongst top stories of this site. Hope it wont deteriorate later.
Great story I really suggest you give it a read. at least the first chapter. pretty please
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The writer of this novel is a Brazilian youtuber called "zy" who was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude photos with a minor girl who was one of his subscribers. She was about 15 years old.
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Finally, we have "Buddha's palm" among us.
The true Ancestor of Sign-in and grand novel.
well because I read this novel in the raws, I'll tell you something that this novel is great. a truly good one. as the story goes on we will see better and better chapters and great background in this novel and everything will become more and more fantastic. the MC is one of the best mc among all the novels that we had read to this point in our lives and I truly expect that this great novel will be selected and continued for translation.
No complaints with the story or character development. Love how dark it is getting and hope he finds more people to join the dark side with him. Love how Julie has a string personality as well as the other two so far hope that as more are added their character development isn’t neglected. Keep it up.
So here’s my review after reading eight chapters. Let’s start with the technicalities: in terms of grammar - there’s little to no errors; pacing - just right. The way of writing is new to me, especially the part where the author narrates as if I am the one in the book — that is an interesting way to write. However I’m still not used to the manuscript type of writing. But that may be preference as well.
On the other hand, concept is intriguing, as well as plot. Well-researched also. Characters have depth. Nothing much I could really critique. Keep on writing.
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Absolute piece of shit novel don't give it a chance hope it fails in sick of fucking reading these piece of shit novels with worthless nonsense face slapping bullshit. Completely unrealistic even in a fantasy novel. MC think theyr low-key smart planners but are actually cowardly cucks who aren't decisive enough to have their servents that's right servants fired. sSeriously if every family had servants who are allowed to freely disturb the family from awakening everyone would be a useless waste. shit novel I'm so pissed I read something which put me in this mood hope this novel fails. Fuuuuck
Absolutely amazing.
The author has done an amazing job all round so far, and i do hope this level of writing continues as the book progresses.
Excellent writing quality. No grammatical errors I could see and the selection of words used made the story seem very free flowing.
It's too early to judge story development, but from what I've read so far, it's clear it has massive potential.
The characters are easy to follow and written well, each unique and we'll suited to the roles the author has set out for them.
And the world background. Very well crafted world and understanding how it works has been made very easy thanks to the author.
Keep up the good work.