Overall the idea of your novel is good, I like all the characters, I like the mansion and the way you added grey color enhanced its beauty .Best of luck
This is so good I know it’ just a start but I love a unique spin
Great! We need to be clear on who the MC is. Xiao Yunhai seems like the center of attraction, now at the least. We are yet to see the adventures in most fantasy-adventure novels. Thanks for author's concern!
Wow, cool story. The fantasy also arrived, making readers like me carried away with an interesting storyline. Go straight to my collection, continue bro!
Hi there, Author-Nim.
After reading the first volume of this book, I give this book a 3,8 review.
Here I explain why.
1) Writing Quality
This book has a lot of typos and grammatical errors just as the author has explained. I can understand that because my native language is not English. However, the number of words for each chapter is inconsistent. I found out some chapters were short, and some were a bit long.
2) Story Development
The pace of the story is kinda slow at some points and made me feel bored. However, the story itself is pretty good even though some parts kinda confusing without any explanation.
3) Character Design
The character description is pretty decent I guess? But I think you forgot to explain what Alex looks like.
4) Updating Stability
It's good to know if you keep updating every day, but the time is kinda random. I can understand that after I read your first Auxiliary chapter.
5) World Background
Kinda vague in my mind since you said that there are three worlds in this book, but I started to understand it the more I read.
I hope you do better next time.
- Eien Warui.
The story started off really well, but as we passed chapter 200, it began to slow down significantly. There were too many characters introduced that we didn't really care about. At some point, it felt like every chapter was just filler and the story didn't progress at all. Additionally, the main characters doesn't get any stronger beyond chapter 50. Personally, I'm dropping this because it has only gotten worse with each chapter. The story its just not moving.
20 chapters in and what can I say, this book is a masterpiece, though i didn't expect less since it was written by magecrafter, it reminds me a little of Eminence in the Shadow, a perfect side character with an overpowered magical skill.Even though it's a system novel, it's not cliche, the characters are interesting and the world building is amazing, I can't wait to read more and see how the plot thickens.I recommend this book to anyone who reads this review, good job author.
The book has the potential. When reading i found not much miatakes but its like no description of Igor and Massie which should have been in the First chapter. I love it by the way....
a very good summoning related book ... well written and good story..update is also consistent sogive this book a try
Well, I am a fan of Cultivation novels; So, I just got struck into it as I saw its genre♥️
To be honest- The plot the novel bears has great potential and intriguity
Dont drop
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if your interested in harm but are sick and tired of those mc's who are like simps and lust after every single woman they lay their eyes on, then this book is for you. The mc here has some self respect and is not someone who dances according to the woman's wills and fancies.
Excellent character development where every character feels alive and are not just stepping stones for mc. It is well paced and definitely worth reading.