I quit after reading 4th line from end of 1st chapter. This novel is complete TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH TRASH
It is quite a good novel, don't know why the rating is so low. Love the main character. Although I have one doubt, how the hell can not the mc remember all of his previous knowledge. sometimes it is shown that he is trying very hard to remember. although he has one of the nest memories.
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A very good novel if your like me and like copy novels.NEEDS MORE UPDATES
Very ? ? updates not to mention sometimes plot don't connect and continue . Overall very promising but lacks effort on part of author. Would like to see more of background development to make story richer otherwise it is just like Dragon blood warrior only focussing on sex Will not get story far one needs balance. Look at mars work and you will know.
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I wish I could read it again cause damn it has alot of suspense in it ???????????. Author keep up the good work the novel is awesome so far hope you don't make it suck.
O problema principal é a demora no post, mas fora isso é uma ótima leitura. Gosto do desenvolvimento do harém, pois creio que vai ajudar no desenvolvimento do herói. Digo mais o lado humano.
Leaving a review to the fun, fast-paced novel. You can say this is more of a 'light novel,' just from thoughts, the author colours his world. Just from the character talking to himself, revealing his feelings. I don't play too much with the system but every system I read is great and makes me go, "I wish i have a system to fawn my crush," and this novel had it. Keep on writing, story have to be told and ends.
Well, it seem like this story is not picked. tath susck, it would have been nice to have a game story where the main character isn't some super powerful DPS or tank.
The grammar is some of the worst I’ve ever read and I’m hoping it eventually gets better. The story has great potential, however in the first two chapters it’s completely garbage.
The players after gaining the ability to revive behave like abnormal patients doing whatever they like , for example blowing themselves up like firecrackers ? ????????? during the feast in elves kingdom.