The story is well thought out, with ample world building and story development. Story is a bit slow paced, but that's how this genre goes, the author needs to put in sufficient world building first so it works. Aside from that, the character design is amazing. Accurately describing characters to giving them life, this book does it all.Added to my library.
WARNING, POSSIBLE SPOIL = For the moment it's quite nice. I really like the the specificities of the mountain range (the Divina Sozo) the first region (alamyst) and its capital (Auratria) is quite interesting. The fact that you talk about the legend of the region and the city makes immersion easy. But I really started to like it for real in chapter 7 because you described a lot of things whith an encyclopedia ( forgot the name) and a "bible" that the protagonist reads which reinforces RolePlay. I hope that you will manage to keep an identical Roleplay throughout your work because perhaps that is what (in addition to your story) will be able to make your webnovel popular, I hope so for you. (Ps: thank you for sending me this webnovel [if you see this comment])
Quite fascinating story love it………………………
It currently has two chapters but the story so far is good, and the premise is intriguing. Keep up the good work! More chapters please, you have a new fan here :)
Unconfident and shameless review by the Author here!This novel entails the main theme of uncovering mysteries and finding out the truth of the world. Whether it be lost history, secret mysteries, and missing truth, the story will revolve around uncovering them.Thus! Comes the main character, Veritas! He is a history lover and always loves to go on adventures to, figure out the truth.Along the story he encounters creatures of mythic, Seraphims, Demons, Creatures from the Depths, many more! The world's power system focuses on the limits of the Soul. Those that have reached for their Soul are called as Pathbearers! They are capable of utilizing the runes, Attunement, Soul Rank, Soul Storage, and etc...As Veritas ascends his Soul, the mysteries around him get deeper and deeper. However, he must be careful not to pry deeper..
It's a great novel, although there are some flaws. The MC personality is pretty annoying, but you just need to tone him down a bit.The fight scenes are also pretty lackluster, how to say it, you don't feel the seriousness of it at all. Fight scenes are supposed to be exciting.Excluding that, the rest is great. It's a great idea and the history isn't rushed, the chapters are also of considerable length. Keep up the good work.
The best bad book I have ever read! It was amazingly surprisingly shockingly... nice, in a mediocre way! Also, the best book for ass-licking too? (Da **** is that tag so clickbait lol...)
So far I'm liking it. Although it is not very elaborate, it is beterr since it lacks filler and I believe that they are the bases to be forming the story of the protagonist.
This story is funny and interesting especially our MC's personality and naughtiness. It's really hilarious. I pity those original owner. Really OOC. If you want to know a villain who's a fanboy of the protagonist, then you should try this one. Keep it up author. I'm waiting to your next updates.
Please MOREPlease MOREPlease MOREPlease MOREPlease MOREPlease MOREPlease MOREPlease MOREPlease MOREPlease MOREPlease MOREDONT DROP THIS, OKAY. MOREEEEEEEEEEE
This is fresh and that's the first compliment I will like to put out there. We have read about prince, princess, vampires, kingdoms, superhumans and the list go on, there aren't much novels here that shows us a realist approach in a common person's life. I could connect with the MC Andrew and how his life has been all about making his mom happy, which to be hones is not a bad thing but in the pursuit of his mom's happiness he somewhere lost the meaning of happiness and fulfilment in his own life, The story is very well written. And I liked the characters and the conversations they have between them. I liked the story and I will be willing to read more of this, so please keep up us updated with new chapters. And Keep up the good work Author :)
Dang! seems like no one wants to read it LOL.and here i am already planned what the 4 lightnings is all about LOL.basically that 4 lightnings corresponds to the Four Symbols.White Tiger, Azure Dragon, Black Tortoise, Vermillion Birdthey can transform for Lin TIan to use.----_--White Tiger - Mount (well still in beast form)Azure Dragon - Sword (along the Dragon Sword Cult)Black Tortoise - Armor (well it is damn hard)Vermillion Bird - Cape (can fly faster, beautiful wings, seems like a god descent. and you can shoots shits with cape LOL)they're actually given to him by his birth father, who is in heaven realm. But seems like my story would go that far