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Really bad grammar like he'd say "vote for my book please" so if you can put up for grammar mistakes very good would recommend.
Seems to have some influence from Japanese light novels. Good characters and an interesting plot so far, will be interesting to see what happens.
I don't know what to say... Just wow...Really just read it, it's only 54 chapters, (when I'm writing this review) you won't regret it. That's a novel worth 5 stars maybe even more. Hope the quality won't change, for the worse, and/or novel dropped.
This book is well charactered with many different scenes that spike up my curiosity. The setting was designed so well that I could see the actual scene in my head. I wonder how you wrote such a magnificent book!
I must say that normally I'm not into thriller or detective's stories. Yet, the author caught my attention from first; the title, them by the synopsis... And of course the story itself. The suspense in this book is just breathtaking. I highly recommend this book! And I'll surely keep on reading it! Good job author✨?
Found your book recently, and was instantly hooked. Can't wait for more chapters.Writing Quality: Great writing. No obvious grammatical errors. Good sentence.Story Development: Very interesting plots. Has multiple plots for different characters going on. Curious on how these plots will interact.Character Design: MC isn't flawless, feels human. MC can grow as a character, and isn't that over powered. Side characters also feel real. They have history, problems/issues to work through.Updating Stability: Decent chapter rate. Consistent and author will say if something delays an update.World Background: Great worldbuilding.
Honestly just don’t bother listening to all the negative review give a try and trust me you have fun reading it if you don’t like it well that’s just you ??u200d♂️
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Great story. Much more interesting than 99% of stuff of this site, Even though the first arc suffered from numerous random flashbacks and the ****** thing is getting a bit tiresome the MC's journey is good enough to keep me invested.
Serious deja vu rn. synopsis is just library of heavens path. i might never get back the emotion i felt reading that, but hopefully this will give me something similar
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It's surprisingly engaging ??️??️? I'm gonna read it MTL, I'm bracing my heart to the poorly written Grammer??️??️.….....…...........
