Just why, dis story was jit’s Complerely ruined ntrEd more times than one can count but you the make the Mac Stay with the girl……what only of it wasn’t Like dis I would have kept reading
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One of the best originals on this site, it's a literal hidden gem ?. The character development is just awesome as personally I care for overpowered protagonists with a good head on their shoulders, and I also loved the subtle romance with YANDERE on both male and female leads. Overall a good read if you're looking for high quality novel with an op protagonist that doesn't kill your brain cells.
I love how the MC thought he was alone, only to be bombarded with a snap back to reality pretty much. I really like how stories like that turn out with that premise and I know I'll enjoy this too with the more I read. The grammar needs some work, but I'm not gonna hold you too much to that.
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Pro'sYou can see the writing quality improving as the story continuesMC can cultivate outside of the systemCon's I noticed many inconsistencies in the story The story is in desperate need of more world developmentThe system is an almost a non-existent part of the storyCertain story points that are added for plot are illogicalQing Yi is a bully and seems completely ungrateful to her master-The story had great potential yet delivered an average story, however the writing has shown vast improvements as the story progresses. I still don't completely understand the reasoning behind Qing Yi having a complete personality change into the most annoying and hated character (by readers) in the story, but it is too late to change after the fact. Hopefully, she jumps ship to the other alchemist, as it would be congruent with her current personality. Overall, I look forward to the next story by the Author, as with their rate of improvement, it will likely be an exceptional work.
Read up to ch 118. Was readable till then but I really couldn’t Anymore.
Save yourself some time and skip this. It is so forced and cliche with zero dimensional characters with typical young master types.
This is blatant plagiarism from "Digging to Survive". The beginning is almost identical...down to the "rules", the layout of the game panel etc. Besides, the author appears to have dropped the story after 40 chapters. Don't waste your time.
Other than that: the translation is decent enough. There are plenty of inconsistencies and a few parts that just don't make sense, but I've seen a lot worse and you can still follow along the plot.
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Boring wish fulfilment novel. Cant really get into it.
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