this is the first review I have written, so here we go. it is a great story so far, maybe a little fast but very enjoyable. I hope the story keeps getting updated. I would love to see the more technical side of running a crime organization. this story should be higher and more popular. the author seems to have trouble getting motivated to make more chapters. to him, I say you are doing amazing, and your stuff is worth my time at least
I'm wishing for a good world background explanation but not too many details, can fill that in later on into the novel.
Clean and ****** Realms. Easy to understand and follow..
Not too overbearing of a main character PLEASE. Awakening 3 lifetimes worth of memories and if he still acts like some young impulsive guy I swear..
Past 2 and current lifetime. 3 worlds. Many stuff to make up on. Many stuff to relate to. Many stuff to make something out of nothing. That's what I meant to say.
The hate is solely because I can not unlock any chapters for this novel, and I keep getting fast passes for it. I can't spend it since it only allows you to purchase all the chapters with coins, but I keep getting the fast passes anyway.
Thanks for your honesty. I like your sypnosis, straightfoward and if someone doesn't like it then.. Don't read the novel!
i took the plunge for everyone who is curious about this novel as of now(chap 86) i would like to say the story is aight its as most people have said like the shield girl one but a little less cringe but with more chinese influence although it has an american background
at some point in the 30's-40's it wasnt even a novel anymore it feels like a machine translation where one sentence its completely wrong and the next its the right grammar
as the story is progressing the mc is slowly going from reg player who got supremely lucky to cliche arrogant chinese mc who looks down on everyone
i also really hoped that there wouldnt be any "im rich so everyone caters to me and i can throw money around like it's nothing so everyone is my servant" kind of side villians but you do see it every few chapters
at the beginning the author or translater (by how the novel is reading) was doing pretty well and keeping up with stats and skills but later has just totally given up on correcting mistakes and just copy pasteing mtls
i would like to say that ill continue holding out and hoping that maybe it would get better but as of now id say theres no hope, u gotta pay for chapters 20 chapters early and theres no effort being put into the grammar so that people who have a hard time reading will have an even harder time
id say just give up dont read it if ur curious go ahead its not like im your boss
I'm impressed! The author's imagination is wild! I really want to read this novel now! Every chapter has hooked me! Please, author, continue writing!!!
Please don't abandon the story. I think it has a lot of potential.
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Cool keep up the good work
A realistic story with heavy themes like bullying, depression, loneliness, insecurity, love, hatred... And just so much more to come... A story like that? You have all of my support - if executed properly.
The first 4 chapters are magnificently written, albeit with a few minor errors here and there. The story looks really promising considering the title of the story.
It states that the story is inspired by the author's real life. That would allow the author to give a moral message to their readers. I hope they succeed in whatever message they're trying to send.
All the best! I'll write more reviews as the story progresses.
Also, I really love and hate cliffhangers, really just makes me wanna read all.
I've only rated this on the writing quality; I can't rate anything else since the story is unreadable. Please please please fix your formatting. Almost every word is capitalised, and there's a lot of weird spacing.
Honestly, I wish you luck with your writing, and if you fix this stuff, I'll give the story a try
Good story, starter of the story was good , characters in the story were also matched very well,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.... .............................................. .........................................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,