HopelessRomantic32op
Great story and plot, and very well written.
I'm not really into mechas and sci-fi but this really recommendable to mecha and sci-fi lovers.
Now while I generally despise the netorare genre entirely, in this instance I cab sort of accept it since it was a catalyst for his "power" what I would like to know though is will there be development between the three involved in the future before I get to heavily involved in this.but I do have to admit I like the way you write I'm up to the [fun night] 1/3 and enjoying it somewhat sofar.
nope, nooe, nopw, nopw, nope, nope, nope, nope, dont even bother reading thia, I've read different concept like this but this one is somehow worse
I put my self with this comment to have good flow of every turn of events
Garbage. MC doesn't only have plot armour, he has plot weapon too. Deals lots of damage to bosses with his supposedly useless talent before it even evolved. He doesn't look for evolution materials, he "luckily" stumbles on them. Hastily written, a skill's description changes within 15 chapters, author adds elements on mana consumption that make a previous fight impossible (and its process was already highly doubtful).World background is never explained, some things pop up here and there when author needs them, without linking them to previously explained things.Character is outright stupid but is supposed to be the best student of his school. For the sake of everything in the world, don't let this tr*sh get translated further.
Before chapter 918, it's 4/5 overall. After 918+ some random started uploading MTL chapters. Qidian, dares to even charge money for that? What's wrong with them...
Can't really do a review after 2 chapters but it does interest me enough to read it when it's updated.
There are very few mistakes in grammar and the descriptions are not too many but enough at least for my taste. Anyway I hope you can at least kerp up with this kind of quality in the future if not better.
I have nothing against bl. I love the genre. But this story needs an editor really bad. And there's a lot of confusion. There isn't enough detail to fully understand things.
Why the fck ? Is this series only till 15 while it already cross 400+?? Fucking webnovel pirating the novel
I can see that this is happening like a original cultivate novel where some thing bad or trade happens and they get something good like a system or a artifact that can change there life. First of all why can't the parents not died it almost happens on every single novel so the Main character can be independent.
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This such an amazing book... really unique... I loved the way the author has written the book so far .... I am really looking forward for more....
