Shameless author here.I'll definitely give my own book a 5 stars, but I won't think that you'll all do the same, so normally this is where I would try to convince you that it is good, but I won't do that.It's good, give it a try, you won't regret it.
The Quality of the Translation is not great, but its acceptable . The good points are this is a U N I Q U E story. I didnt see this plot on WN Yet. The plot is not great but its different, which us enough for me. Support it .
really enjoying this so far. takes a leisurely yet entertaining pace that leaves you enjoying the progression of the story. This is definitely a gem in an otherwise dissapointing summer showcase.
the father probably has more than one wives or the mother kept giving birth to twins or triplets
I found this when I searched up phyco to see if their were any good evil character stories. Here I find this gem, great for me. So far I am loving it and expect even more even if I am ou on the first 30 chapters.
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So far I am hooked in this story and I have to say author you are doing amazing so far keep it up man can’t wait for more chapter!
Also if you haven’t read this novel give it a shot!
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...I like the book...
Just found this and looking forward to reading, nice to see more undertale fanfics hopefully I can find some warframe and borderlands ones that aren't dropped after read this.
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Novel is quiet interesting in my opinion.....
1. Writing quality is upto standards, just that there are some mistakes here and there in spellings like calling a male her and a female him.
Some sentence structures are not properly structured...
like you can change, "There is not something will happen to him" to
" Don't worry, Nothing will happen to him "etcetc.
2. Story is also developed well till now....nothing much to say, you can see the gist of the story from the synopsis and read it....
3. Character design is also detailed, nobody seems like 2 dimensional character...though you can try giving some characters some inner thoughts and could also give them some backstories to make them appear more real to the readers.
4. For now updating stability is also well, as can seen from 8 ch/ week on the front page.
5. Don't know much about world background....I mean it's just starting afterall......
Overall nice work from Author San.