his novel is here bıraktım.mc in the next section, he is hunted by guards, or the object of research of sorcerers olur.mc if he ate her and then started hunting in the woods, I would continue reading, but when Mc became someone who didn't work with his brain, tried to be heroic, didn't have intelligence, I quit the novel
Interesting to read, story development is a bit catchy and you would wanna hope to see where it goes next. Good work to the author....... More characters should be added though
Excellent Piece, I got to know of it from a friend and out of reluctancy I got to try out and here i am reviewing the first best webnovel I've ever read. i wish the inks don't stop flowing, the MC is quite cute as well.
Any idea when you will start writing this book again I really Enjoyed it but left it just hanging there
i smell the indian nationalism…. probably more than any cn novel [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Hey bro, I just found the book. Synopsis seems very interesting. But since there are clones i hace to ask. Will mc's harem eff his clones, any yuri? I hate both of those stuff, feels like ntr for me. Hope you can give me some info before i start reading. Thanks
Disappointing read for this novel. It appears to be based loosely around another novel that I recall, something about 7 sisters or the like, no matter. Overall from the 15 free chapters (creators note in chapter 1 said 40 odd free) I found this dull, uninspiring and so typically cliche for this genre. Usual start is a struggling MC, down and out, needing cash fast to save ill relative, is miraculously saved by a female lead who reveals his family as their benefactor years ago. Discovers there are 3 other sisters who he now gets to live with and is to marry one by orders of their mother. From this point it is just a failing travesty. The MC is ineffective and quite righteous, but fails hard to be engaging, I could find nothing to remotely connect with to feel any particular emotion. The sisters are, fro what I have seen, rather manipulative, each not wanting to become a bride and don’t hesitate to throw other girls under the bus to gain his interest.Again, i cannot recommend this as nothing more than a sad attempt to gather readers giving nothing engaging back. Another criticism I have is the lack of reader tags to help identify various elements to enable readers to make a informed choice AND the premature chapter locks in place. Locking anything, before say 40 chapters, does not allow enough story to be assimilated and given a fair chance to decide whether it is suitable. 16 chapters is barely a footnote in a novel.
Hi Author why have you stopped updating the novel?
After reading 200 chapters I finally feel that the author just doesn't know what he is doing and he doesn't have a clear future plan. First let's talk about MC. Although MC is interoduced as a lucky dog and the whole system business is also great Author reluctantly didn't improved MCs's strength for at least 100 chapters or so. I don't get it why MC needs to be weak. So for 100 or so chapters MC did nothing but host a big event. That event is also questionable cause I don't know the reason why the inn got so many popularity all of a sudden. On a second thought the story was great before that long event. Also I get it that MC is cautious but the outright mistakes he made although the author backed that up saying he has brain tumor.Anyway my whole point is if you are so reluctant to make the MC even fight why not make him a saitama type MC who is already super strong. That way we don't need to see MC is simping or things like this.
This is a great story. I like the setup and the fact that there is no system. It's refreshing.The grammar is great too. However, having reached chapter 219 I think it is getting a little stale. There is no exitement anymore. Everything goes too smootly for the protagonists. There is no struggle, no challenge anymore. Everything goes exactly like the protagonists want. An example: One of the protagonsists says "Although we might not have experience in shipbuilding, we are still able to build a better ship than anything currently in the market". The official they are talking to simply accepts that. This story tries to stay realistic (as much as you can anyway with a setting like this) but seemingly don't take into account that there are other intelligent and innovative people in the world. Yes, they have experience from the 21st century and it gives them a great advantage, but that does not mean that they incapable of losing. I think this story should try to get back to its roots, if just a little.
Thanks for the updates consistency really like that, going to see if this lives to the hype...don’t disappoint me...
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Someone once asked me "why dont you read web novels" I responded with "there isnt one good enough for me" that changed today with the discovery of this solid 100 out of ten